Delayed destiny ch 15
I'm probably going to scrap this whole first write and redo it all sometime in the future when i'm a better writer. for now let me know what i can do to improve the story quality.
Boku to Sensei - Part 1
Kyuuhari desperately pleaded his teacher, hoping that he'd see it in his heart and agree to let him redo his test. but alas, kruger didn't waver and simple shook his head affirmatively. "stop begging, that's pathetic.
The Day That I Meet a Hero Chapter 01 REDO
This will be my first Story.... It won't be a big one.... A bit of a small one. I hope you enjoy it very much! :-7 The year is 2045....... The human race as all come together under the rule of Hydra( if you don't read comics, Hydra is from...
Shots Fired
Sliding back, he closed himself up and got up to redo his belt. "yes sir," chance replied again, unfolding himself from under the desk. standing he stretched his arms over his head, feeling the strain despite his favorable height.
Sylvester's Family Tales 34
Come back tomorrow, we need to redo your essay revisions anyway." grinned foghorn.
The Photographers Apprentice - Chapter two: Things that go bump in the Night.
If you wanted i could help you redo all of your work." it was a thought, i really didn't have much to do at all, and i really wanted to get to know him a little better.
Different Type of Personal Training
If i miss my mark i want i may just have to redo and i know you don't want me to do that." his master was right, he didn't want to go through it twice, let alone once.
A simple story I ( 19/22 )
I'll find something clean and redo it all to you. sit down in the living room. » daisy reached the bathroom while john took a chair in the kitchen and went to the indicated place.
Chapter 1: The Raid
You don't want me to have to redo this." he says as he grabs something that had been resting end first in the firepit.
3 - First Time for Everything
Also, if i missed any tags, i promise i'll redo them tomorrow when i'm wide awake.it was almost a month before frosty was himself again fully.
A Trainer's Pride and Joy (Chapter 1/3) ~A Commission for Crimson Dragon
He chuckled one final time as he left the room to redo the shower that he and arcanine had just undone. kale stepped under the hot stream of water for the second time that morning and began to ponder future encounters with his new knowledge.
To Murr With Love
After standing back up and redoing the ass zip, he said "follow me." he led me down a hallway to a staircase that emptied off in the basement.