Torpedo Run Chapter 27

Then the torpedoes hit, in the stunned moment between taking such severe direct hits and recovering from the shock of a sudden overwhelming attack.

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Torpedo Run Chapter 25

"st-starboard systems are all down, some kind of ecm interference from the star of aden probably...uh...port systems...we've got three torpedo tubes and...uh...four main rail cannon batteries?"

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Torpedo Run Chapter 24

#24 of torpedo run hi everyone. not sure how i feel about this chapter. it came out kind of forced, to my mind. anyway, give me your opinions on it, if you'd be so kind? thanks for reading!

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Torpedo Run Chapter 23

#23 of torpedo run hey everyone :) sorry for the delay, xmas break threw me off my game a bit, and this chapter didn't start writing itself until halfway through. anyway, comments and critique are very much welcome!

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Torpedo Run Chapter 21

#21 of torpedo run comments are extremely welcome. in particular, let me know if the action stays exciting, the characters interesting, and so on. thanks for reading!

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Torpedo Run Chapter 17

#17 of torpedo run chapter 17 nivea 'niece' gordon lay on the soft grass in her two-piece bikini and stared up towards the sky with a relaxed smile.

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Torpedo Run Chapter 16

That, and because leaving on a skiff in the middle of a massive military brawl of rail cannons, plasma blasts, and torpedoes was like asking to be spaced.

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Torpedo Run Chapter 15

#15 of torpedo run comments are very welcome, as are votes and such. can't improve my writing without help :) be aware that there is some medical hygiene-related grossness in this chapter.

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Torpedo Run Chapter 12

#12 of torpedo run hi everybody, let me know if you like this chapter. comments are what keep me going on all of this :d i'm a narcissistic writer, you see, and am fueled largely by praise and adulation or something.

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Home Is All We Have Left

A torpedo from a legionnaire cruiser slammed straight into the starboard side of the ship, digging deep into the hull and exploding. the victory halted and the ship was a sitting duck.

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Beefy's story: Part 3

"this was the forward torpedo room, but we don't need torpedoes, because this boat's been converted to a cargo ship, so it's a cargo hold now." he said with the wave of a hand, and gave me a second to look around.

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Sunken City

On orders from on high she sends the first torpedo on its deadly way. it streaks its way just as helga designed it, towards the target. the corallite prepares another buzz saw to fire as the torpedo slips into the launch cavity.

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