Give Us a Twirl - 2026 update
It ended up being not much more than t&a fan service and poorly-written “will they or won’t they” sexual tension between the two main characters.
Star Wars: My Bounty Ch 1-6
Resting his chin on it, the bounty hunter resigned himself to a boring afternoon of poorly written, inaccurate crime dramas. … boba didn't remember when he'd fallen asleep.
The Seven: Part Two, Of Valor in Men.
written notes.
Christmas Chaos - A Hilarious Holiday Adventure
“her sappy, clichéd message is exactly the sort of poorly written dialogue asterbury despises, but she's still right. we can't be fighting amongst ourselves right now.
12 Days
The poorly written, predictable plots made it easy to make fun of them though, so the two reindeer cuddle, chuckling to themselves and cracking jokes till the early afternoon.
Problem Child Part One (Echo Visual Novel Fan Fiction)
._" "neferu is a poorly written character, in a poorly written episode, of an obviously inferior series," the frog comforts the stoat condescendingly, "it's not your fault." "oh, piss off.
Tai's Story - Part Three
He was a father trying to save his son, with twenty poorly-written essays on etymology to slough through when everything was back to normal.
Genetic Moon 2037 — Hard Labor
The brief of the first was a simple paragraph, poorly written and strangely childish. the summary of the brief at the end was, "don't fucking try to cold blood a mammal, warm reptiles is easier." the second was a lot more in depth, and well written.