Phantom Chronicles Chapter 9
I frowned at that noticing the past tense and what looked like unshed tears. i was just about to ask him if he was okay when the door burst opened and a tall elderly wolf stepped in. i lit up immediately at seeing him. "grandpa!"
Expedition: Achilles' Heel
"you speak of her in past tense but do not know who she is?" "the only thing of which we're certain, construct, is that we're in a prototype supership with a planet-scouring weapon presently commanded by grand admiral kaarchan."
New Life in a New Body V2 Operation Countdown
Pointing at me she said "wanted, past tense. also if you must know her name is roslyn, at least i think she's a her." "oh, ok. so should i tell devil just to forget about it?" i asked.
The Mark Callaway Story Chapter 1
I tried to fix that, but the entire original was in present tense...so i might have missed something here or there while converting it to past tense. interesting side note: in the original, their uncle's name was tom.
The Mark Callaway Story Chapter 3
Also, i wrote it after i started writing things in past tense. because of that, this one was a lot easier to edit...and unlike the last two, i doubt there are any tense problems hidden in there i need to apologize for. fun times!
When I Woke Up
You may have noticed when i talked about having no friends earlier, i used past tense. yea, for the longest time i had no friends... but i do now. not a man, or a woman. not a human at all.
The Upstanding Citizen
I did a goofy thing where i wrote part of it in present tense and part of it in past tense, and he put in the time to make everything nice and consistent. thanks again, wolfhound -- you rock!
Shades of the Past
But i ask you not to hate the blue dragon, the 'blue demon' as a certain someone had liked to call her--" liam raised a brow at the use of past tense. it was something but a weak lead at best. word could have easily spread by now.
Possessive (A1, B10, C9)
Seeing us together in a state of undress would go a long way to convincing people we are a couple, and that tamamo is past tense." "the boxers stay on," conner said. "sleep how you want, but my boxers stay on."
Online Dating
Woodfell is past tense and woodfall is present tense, but hey. you learn something new every day, right?"
Love me forever
The longer and further the man forced his tongue past tense muscles the more the owner of said muscles began to twitch and tighten up.** _ **it feels weird!! why does it feel like this?
Secret Admirer (M/M) (Pt. 11 of "Under The Devil's Eye")
Hawk let the past tense slide right on by as he watched peter rearrange furniture. the fox disappeared upstairs, then came back with one of the heavy dining room chairs, which he sat right in the middle on the stone floor in front of the fire.