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Fang's Pussy

One where there is no lame plot, no lame introduction, just sex like you like it. feel free to critisize me or compliment me.

Anal, Dragon, M/M, Massage, Oral

Chapter 1- Blood and Tear

Just wanted to say sorry to whoever i jacked the idea from. anyway, please comment, and rate, cause i wanted to get an idea of what i can improve on, and i know im not perfect. i am far from the best author here, so please give me some constructive critisism

Death, Human, No-Yiff, Plot Development, Pokemon, Short, Transformation, Violence (Not In Yiff)

Finding a Mate: Chapter 3

///// ok folks....comments, critisism and the like appreciated

F/F, Human, Impregnation, Incest, Inflation, Knot, M/F, Werewolf

a dark and stormy night

Blanket and he scoots closer and leans on me "thank you for helping me out" "of course this would have been a blessing when i ran away" ----this is my first story please comment the probs and the grammer problems and post your honest opinion positive critisism

Fox, Husky, storm

Derek Does... Chapter 2 - His Dad's Boss

Constructive critisism is muchly appreciated! enjoy this new chapter!

Blackmail, Husky, M/M, Prostitution, Semi NC, Siamese Cat, Underage

The House Dahan part II: Chen's second day, part 2

Once again i urge anyone with constructive critisism to come out with it. so once again we shall assume you've not accidentally made a profile on an obviously adult site and opened this story. let's give your intellectual capacity that much credit.

Anal, Cub, Forced, M/M, Wolf, Wrestling, combat, dominant

All You Need is Love: Chapter 1

critisism is therefore appreciated so long as it's constructive.) david walked out of the large building shaking uncontrollably.

Canine, Incest, M/F, No-Yiff, Plot Development, Series, Singing, Story Progression, Tragedy

To Live Immortal

I happily accept the sandwich technique for critisism. also, if you can offer help in helping make me a better writer, i will gladly accept it. my inbox is always open!

Aroused, Biting, Character Development, Cum, Death, Deep Penetration, Deep Thrust, Explicit, Extreme, Fantasy, Forced, Gore, Insanity, Knot, M/F, Mutilation, Necrophilia, Non-Anthro, Orgasm, Plot Development, Predator/Prey, Pussy, Quadruped, Rape, Story Progression, Vaginal, Violence

A Dolphins Crush: in the Beginning pt 1

This is my first story on ys so please leave some comments on how to improve if you think it needs it constructive critisism if you please:) it's another wet day, hell its wet every day since being a dolphin means you live in the sea. what i mean

Dolphin, Intro, M/solo, Secret Love

Fortune-chapter one Love??? (part one)

Hi, this is my first romance story ever so, critisism is great, constructive or othrwise, in case i'm that bad... anyway, this is the first chapter to a book thing that i thought up a few days ago.

Gay Relationships, Lion, New School, School, Wolf

Inner City Fun

/// hmm where to go....where to go....might become a series might not. and critisism and the like all welcome here

Human, M/F, Modern, Non-Anthro, Oral, Virgin, Wolf

First Steps: The Way It Is

Thank you guys all for reading it, and constructive critisism will be helpful okay well here it is.

Character Development, Cuddling, Highschool, Human, M/M, No-Yiff, Panther, Plot Development, Story Series, Wolf