Sylveon is Just That Good
You are using that same feedback, albeit getting lost in it, because as sylveon gets closer to his orgasm, you can literally feel it approaching.
Alex & Brendan - Introducing the Brothers
Please give me some feedback, and be sure to look for brendan in thenovelist's exploration's series sometime soon, hopefully! thanks again everybody!!! ~dowski
Discovery - Chapter 5, Forgotten
#5 of theorium chronicles enjoy and do leave feedback, it actually allows me to become a better writer, which in turn gives you better stories to read. you know, if you don't just realize there's other writers. again, enjoy and leave feedback!
Headfeathers writing sample
Headfeathers writing sample, would like feedback on style, information, and layout. this is part of chapter one, not the whole of it. any and all constrictive feedback is welcome. i'd love to hear opinions please!
JUXTAPOSITION Chapter 1 - Sounds of Silence
Extra thanks to solipsisticnarcissistic for support and continues feedback! (ps. this takes place during bolt's journey, after his self-realization and before he reaches hollywood.)
Aciec Aeternam (etarnal Battlefield) Into and info
I hope you all enoy, and i would love to have feedback on the chapters!
Dullahan
I turned this story in and got some pretty good feedback from my teacher. i recently found the story while digging through some papers so i figured i'd post it. any feedback would be greatly appreciated. hope you all enjoy!
Excuses, Excuses
I'm so glad to see you back here in such numbers, and the feedback on the first chapter after the break was joyful to read - so many thankyous for your feedback!
Pokemon: The Dark Wanderer Chapter one: Loss and gain; the amnesiacs and the kindly mother
Any constructive feedback is again, welcome.
Wet Encounter
Please keep that in mind the next time you see a message asking for feedback. ^\_^
Static Memory Record 77-74656
Of course, they were in varying states of having their brains installed, so expecting productive customer feedback was a bit unreasonable.
Pocket Fox: Objectification
"ok, right so we have arranged for a few small focus groups to come in and give us some feedback on the product. i'd like you to take them through a bunch of questions and get their feedback. you brought it with you, didn't you?"