Rare Collector-Chapter 2-On the Road (Edited)
Yes, this is the edited version of chapter two. i took the advice of a few reviews, and added a little and slashed a little to make the story's flow slow down a little. and i still got it out before xmas! woot, deadline still met!
Playground of the Serpent 1 of 3
This one, an edited version of this (slightly different pose of the two tiny guys), and a third. as such, i'm writing a 3-part story with little cuties hide and kitnip meeting leera for the first time.
Roses I: Welcome to the Neighborhood
I have, however, written chapter 5 and hopefully i'll have it posted for you guys, along with the edited versions of 1-4, soon. anyway, i plan to make this series a lot longer than "those forgotten."
Spirit Bound: Chapter Fifty-Two
If several people have concerns, i will provide an edited version that keeps the vast majority of the story but removes the graphic content.
Devil's Snare
You can find the edited version in the anthology, which can be found here: https://www.storenvy.com/products/28517174-seven-deadly-sins-furry-confessions devil's snare "i hate you," the black she-wolf said while looking at her reflection in the black obsidian
The Real Folk Blues: High School Days Revised Edition! Ch. 1
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The Assigment (Chapter 1)
This is an edited version of the original chapter 1. i had to change the character, because of several reasons. also, i would like to apologize for the russian numbers in the end of the chapter, this site does not support the letters.
Spirit Bound: Chapter Fifty-One
If enough readers have concerns, i will provide an edited version of the chapter that keeps the majority of the story, but removes the graphic content.
The Vulpine Smile chapter 1
#1 of vulpine smile series okay so this is the edited version and i would like to thank the grammar nazi himself hammerfist for taking his time to (very thoroughly) correct my grammatical errors and for throwing me a few ideas and pointers on how to make
Weekly #2: Nefarious
edited version: here is the final draft of this story. many thanks to scian for his tremendous work on editing! *** what happens when your coworker is a jerk that gets on your nerves? why, you set him up, and hope for the best. or worst?
Demon's Lust: Chapter Two
Maybe she could get through the conversation with just a little bit of the truth - and an edited version of it at best - if she just played her cards right. she was naïve. "is he a dragon?" kao swallowed. could she lie?
Kung Fu Lauren
Lauren selected the 'special edition' version when the menu came up, which told her to use the glasses that came with the dvd.