R/7 Lost Heaven
"the truth, who we are," gerry explains. lee shouts, "is it worth it gerry?" lee stomps forward "do you really want to know?" "yes!" gerry cries. "i want to know who were we?" lee explains, "there was a reason that we left."
The Model - Chapter Nine
"i was looking at san amador coast, but it's a little too close to home for me," the young doberman explained. "i went there," i explained. "it is a nice campus."
Making a Good Little "Wife" ( Part 1 )
"yeah...he can be a bit fiery at times" the bear explained.
- Celesteon - Reunion Arc - Ch. 3
"that doesn't fully explain how you managed to gain an injury and then appear on the other side of the room." sid draws a deep breath and continues to explain.
Living Legends: Volume (Mew)Two: Part 2
"i read the mind of a crewman who passed by a while ago." she explained calmly, walking over to the opening it. "meet you there?" she asked, before stepping out the door.
Broadening Ken's Horizons - Chapter 18 - The Search
"now explain." roger explained how tank, in his diary, detailed the procedure for admittance in the bodybuilding program, which was actually a transformation procedure.
Chapter 15: Progress
I want to test to see if it is safe for me to touch a fur, because of their integrated animal genetics," hunter explained as he recognized his change in mood.
TOKYO ZONE Episode 5 Idenshi no High
Hikari explained. "so what do we count as?" tafu replied to hikari. "we are homo hen'i-tais," hikari explained, "the mutants mutated from humans." "so why is this an extermination club?" akane asked hikari.
Chapter 5 - Departing and Arriving
He explained. "my name is mark wong. i'm new here and my family is moving to charizard valley. we're kinda lost." i explained our condition to him and hoped that he'll help us. "lost??? my dear friend. you're standing in it.
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
To summarize - not everything needs to be explained, and what does need to be explained is shown in an organic manner, and sometimes incrementally.
The Model - Chapter Five
"hi alec, these are yours," the jackal explained, pointing to two pairs of underwear; briefs and a jockstrap as kurt had explained earlier. they were blue and black and material on each was a kind of mesh design.
Chapter 7: The Past Tells All!
Guess that explains why amanda's galvantula had looked unorthodox." ethan interrupted. "as well as it shooting black lightning.""in a nutshell." hilda explained. "and we only got lucky with fighting amanda due to her having possibly learned it recently.