A Day In The Forest
first story so please tell me how i did also i didn't describe daniel much cause i dont know i just dont want to describe guys but what i picture is like a more human fox robin hood from the disney movie so yhea.
Shades of Silver part 1: chapter 1
That's my first story up here. well. the first part of my first story. criticism. this is only the second draft so i'm expecting it and i take it to heart, kindly too so let it rip. expect more, whether you like it or not.
FInding Happiness at Hartham High
Note: hi this is my first story that i have written so please be gentle with the comments. and yes i know it is lame and dramatic an stuff... so there. :d disclaimah!
Sarah's Story Ch. 1
I was homeless, jobless, and penniless; the events that ended what i refer to as my first story had left me so. it had felt like my life was over, and in a sense, it was.
ABYSS WATCHER IN VILOUS
#1 of abyss watcher in vileos this story is a dark souls crossover with vilous the rest is in the story hello everyone this is my first story on sofurry so give me pointers on spelling and tell me what i did rong i want to learn from my mistakes also if
Mew's love Pt.1
Please this is my first story ever i just got an idea and when on from there please show me mistake's and i will fix them and feedback is welcome more will come soon in mew's love pt.2
All for you chapter 1 The Dream
#1 of all for you this my first story ever and i would like some criticism. it was like any other monday. with school just starting i was in a bit of a rush. thankfully fourth was praticly over. with lunch on my mind i started getting hungry.
Spice and Rice
#1 of spice and rice ---second story, this is an adult story based loosely around my first story. it is a gay story. sit back and enjoy--- spire smiled as he sat back into his throne.
Bonds of Love (1)
#1 of bonds of love series this is my first story i ever wrote hope you all like please comment and rate bonds of love: the series chapter one the story begins again i laid there in bed with him.
Alone On An Island Chapter 1
Please bare with me people this is my first story i have ever written since i was 12 and i'm not good at describing things but please enoy! ? chapter 1 "candy, do you want to go on an adventure?"
A chance hunt.
Heya my first story posted on a site.. ever really, so please be gentle in your reviews. may only be the introduction to a series of followups depending on how well recieves my writing style is.
Hello, Seattle Chapter 1
But i'll try to keep you guys entertained with regular stories untill i work up enough courage to try xd this is my first story, so sorry if it isn't that good.