What Universe am I In??? Chapter: 0 (intro)
Constrictive criticism appreciated!
Duty Chapter 25: A Needed Calm
"i guess alex is one of them," he said, "...i mean...uh...i mean...you know...in critical condition..." jerry placed his hand on joji's shoulder, "go home, joji. we can take care of things around here."
choose your own erotic Pokemon story 7
You tell dusk, as he swoops in low and hits noctowl, knocking him unconscious, it was a critical hit!
Rexi & Talon: 15 -- Rexi
Why was it critically important to send a messenger to the goldsmith, and tell him _do not proceed on my order_. what order? who was zackton working with? why? rexi was practically grinding his teeth.
Chapter 3: Expect the Unexpected
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Merge - 00 - Prologue
Constructive criticism is welcomed. unconstructive criticism is not. image is of matt lancaster, the main character, a husky.
Silanna's Song- Chapter 1
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Obsession
After many observations, i found the term excessive, but i heard him without criticizing. myself, i already knew this feeling, but i will talk you about this soon. little, he often has rejected.
Under The Cherry Blossoms Part Nine
Crit - short for critical hit. chc - critical hit chance. aggro- aggression.
Making an interview
"hum not bad your sister is uh, quite nice in these" dera said blushing a little herself though inashi didn't know why "she seems very nice and is fit enough to join our starters we take recruited models to a few of our critics we critic our own work to make
The Pendulum II: The Dance
It was critical that he find a way to end this now, before he lost the edge that his speed and smaller size gave him. kurt, surprised at the lion's incredible agility, knew that he had made a critical mistake when the second blow connected.
NAS characters.txt
Read this first: i would be the happiest to any constructive criticism. i have so far created and designed every character by myself, with the exception of taking inspiration from other works(but then, think nothing is really new.