Be Careful What You Wish For: Chapter I
#1 of be careful what you wish for series it is my first story, so provide some criticism! but don't be a jerk. this story is about a wolf that is into babying and diapers...not giving away too much' so you will be surprised!
Anima World Part 1
critics and comments are welcome. by the year 2025, the world as we know it has ended... while it is not a sudden event, the whole eventful year had been a gradual process which started unexpectedly since the year 2012.
Zootopia In-Depth Review
Zootopia is beloved by critics, acclaimed for its incredible animation, great characters, and intriguing storyline. another reason many critics love zootopia is the film's underlying message on prejudice.
Lost in the Silent Forest Ch. 3
**_ruther's constitution check: critical fail_** the wolf gagged heavily at the sheer size of the beowolf. his girth seemed to cover the entirety of his mouth. he gasped in surprise at the length.
Pandora's Templar - Chapter 21
We're on a critical rescue mission here; there's no time for games! can you _please_ do as i have asked?"
Unpleasant Developments, Chapter one: Breakfast and Bedlam.
Please comment, and offer all criticisms to me. again, i need to improve.
Chapter 3-An Unexpected Meeting
Please leave criticism, please i am begging you!
DnD sheet
| | | longsword | 3 | 1d8+1 | 19-20/x2 | | | range | type | notes | | | - | | 4lb, med, | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | attack | attack | damage | critical | | | | | | | | | range | type | notes | | | | | |
A different kind of training - Prologue
For a better idea of what ronan looks like https://www.sofurry.com/view/648706 comments and critics are welcome as long as the criticism is constructive and not just flaming. happy reading ;) disclaimer: i do not own pokemon.
Can a Band-Aid Fix A Reactor Leak?
'critical' meant that the reactor was producing enough energy to sustain itself, 'super critical' meant that the amount of energy it was creating was going up. 'prompt critical' meant bad things. very bad things.
Vargothen - Constructing A Foundation (Session 2)
We take down 2 zombies near us... the 2 zombies moving to the archers take damage as well... the warrior, and ebeis, are both seriously wounded, i am critically wounded at this point...
NAS characters.txt
Read this first: i would be the happiest to any constructive criticism. i have so far created and designed every character by myself, with the exception of taking inspiration from other works(but then, think nothing is really new.