Psychocalypse - Phrenic Intro
_Is that thunder?_ Nothing but darkness. And cold? No, sweat. _It sounds like... a landslide. I can't see anything! And... and I can't move!_ No amount of mental struggling seemed to properly translate into motion. Even with the mind afire with...
Bad End 3- Arcanine Toysuit
In this story, an exciting leap into third-person perspective as we see a young man so excited to try on his new latex pokemon toysuit that he stupidly neglects to read the instructions and gets what he deserves. and probably what he wanted too, really.
A good idea
Three heads, in general, were considered to be just the right quantity for those who wanted more than one), i took off my left and right heads and positioned them to have a good look from the third person perspective, with niyra mirroring my actions soon after
What's the Measure of a Man? I Don't Know But My Tail is Three Feet Long
Not the least of which was switching into the third-person perspective. it may not seem like much, but writing 'he said' and 'johnathan did' drove me crazy for the first week or so.
Grant's Rampage 1.0
The text is right out of the game but edited to provide a third person perspective and to provide a smoother storyline. vote now for the outcome that you want by commenting below! voting will close at 10pm aest sat 14th june. and you can only vote once!
It Was a Casual Affair
Their date night had gone lovely. It was a casual affair, as it often was outside of anniversaries and other special occasions. Alonzo, a near-50-year old rottweiler whose once squat and muscular figure was now only vaguely marred by a bit of belly,...
Writing Tips vol. 2
third person perspective comes in degrees, as to how much knowledge they have, but generally they only know the thoughts of the current viewpoint character, and the observable actions and words of others.
Xavier's Changing
He resembled, from a third person perspective, a very tall jock. not over the top on muscle, but enough to make star quarterback. he rushed upstairs, feeling much more energetic than before, and so much more than he used to.
A brother's love
This is a particularly dark scene i've had on my mind for a while, yes it is pretty... different to what most of you would read, but i mostly did this to work on writing in the third person perspective.
Part 2: Special Dinner
...the dream then took on a third person perspective, fox saw himself curled up in that ball of pulsing flesh, slowly yet almost poetically turning to an orange blob with steadily vanished, then his consciousness blanked out and he died.
Chapter Sixteen: Secret Reminders
:p (a/n: this chapter is from a third-person perspective. usual 'in-head' approach continues next chapter.) she stared at the note with bemusement the only remaining response.
Trans Lab 003
I felt everything that i felt in the vision, but i still saw from the third person perspective, as well as my own. it was very unnerving. later that day, i found myself walking down that street. i was determined to ignore my 'vision' and just walk on by.