#1 of dark stormy n..revised
this is a revised version of the original which can be found in my other folder i am writing the revised version for english because i got a fifteen chapter novel assignment right after i wrote the original so i just copied and
College, Husky, Wolf, revised
I added as much detail as i could think of so please let me know what you think of this revised version of chapter 2.
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just as i take my seat in the back of the classroom, the bell goes off. the classroom is just your average sized classroom.
Fox, Gay, Highschool, Love, Wolf, revised
As the title says, this is not the sixth chapter i know some have been waiting a long time for, and I know I should probably be putting this in a journal post but...I figured this would probably be seen more than a journal entry.
First, an...
Clean, Revision proposal, Story Progression, Story rewrite
#1 of guardians downfall revised
i am sorry everyone for the lack of uploads, so i have decided to release part one of guardians: downfall revised and edited, this will be a part of the final copy of the book and will showcase the revisions and editing that
Action, Adventure, Drama, Edited, Fiction, Final product, Gay, Guardians, Guardians Downfall, No-Yiff, Novel, Revised and Edited, Science Fiction, Serenity, Starship, Straight, Violence, downfall, revised
This is the first revision and i'm going to send it off to some beta readers for additional feedback on the edits, then revise it one more time before i send it off! woot woot!
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Angel, Chapter, Clean, Dragon, Elf, Human, Mark of the Chosen, Novel, Revision, Story Progression
Prologue
As the pencil, a lost fragment of my past, sails through the air I begin to wonder why I wanted fame and fortune. Was it because everyone knows you for everything good you have done and won't tease you for a lack of anything? Or was it that I...
Alternative, New, Revision, Sci-Fi, Zealand, bullied, fame, needs, nerd, old, time, travel, universe, writing
Geff, a student of anthroveterinary science gets slightly more than he anticipated while trying to arrange some extra revision study of werewolf anatomy...
a commission for a friend. nsfw.
_'revision'_
_blacksnip the thoroughbred.
Female, Male, NSFW, Transformation, Werewolf, Yiff
After two hours had elapsed, they had finished revising last week's math lesson and also finished up on homework.
Adolescent, Avaeria, Blind, Blindfold, Character Development, City, City of Wings, Clan, Dragon, Dragoness, Fledgling, Friendship, Lessons, Paint, Painting, School, Schoolmates, Student, Study Group, Study Session, Teenager, Teenagers, Tuition, Young, classmates, disabled, education, friend, friends, learning, students, studying, tutor
#2 of the secrets of a dragon
this took me longer than i want it to--everything i procrastinated came up at the same time and i got too focused on chapter 9--, but after five revisions here is the revised chapter 2.
Disney, Dragon, Fanfiction, Gryphon, M/M, NC, Series
My patience for making revisions based on information that could have been provided earlier will be limited, so please be as detailed with your wishes as you can from the beginning!
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