Ch. 2 - A Day In The Life
"that's right," alex began, filling the doctor in on the edited version of her story, having gotten plenty of practice recently. "so yeah, i kinda got screwed," she finished with a slight blush. "that's really unfortunate.
The Nagai and Nureta Of Pokémon Dynasties chronicles - Book 1
This is an edited version with several additions.
First Impressions Chapter 4.
Ruth proceeded to give an edited version of the previous few hours to the driver. "you lucky git. secretary involved too. used to know a rabbit forty years ago. she never let up." gordon laughed.
First Impressions Chapter 5.
"oh, only an edited version of yesterday and last night," she grinned cheekily. "sod off, you teaser!" amy threw a pillow at her. jessica ducked and returned it, hitting stefan in the face. "oiy!"
i pod love part 7: Hate
My cowriter uploaded the un edited version before my mate could edit it but here it is and wow its fucked up as soon as i stepped off the ramp reia practically takled me in a hug.
Spirit Bound: Chapter Sixty-Three
Nathanial just finished telling his grandparents a highly edited version of the last month's events, but it was still a long story.
Taste of Fire: Kingpin
Keisnam an edited version, to protect some uninvolved operations currently being executed. i didn't intend to share it with you but my contact assured me you could be trusted." alex broke the seal and read through the names and operations.
Extraordinary Life: Chapter Four
Jake told ayden an edited version of what happened last night.
United Through Two Worlds Chapter 19
Later, when i'm less tired and it isn't one in the friggin morning, i'll repost an edited version with spelling and wording corrected. enjoy the chapter, it was tough to write.
The Spyro Chronicles Chapter 30: Dawn of a New Age
Deviantart helpers silent\_rampancy- assistant writer/ concept drawer iceflame1019- current editor for special edition version bound for da typhoon productions 2008 spyro and cynder belong to sierra entertainment.
Those Forgotten I: He's the One [edited]
#1 of those forgotten _ ~~~~~~~ **those forgotten - he's the one ~~~~~~~ notes: well, the here's the twice re-edited version. i fixed what i think to all of the problems, i could have missed a few.
A Bunny's Conversion - Chapter One
There's a slightly edited version without gore and bonebreaking, but i didn't do much to tweak the dialogue, so it may still not be your cup of tea.a small bunny wakes up tied in a warehouse, having been beaten over the head and abducted.