My main question, really, is do i need a prologue like this or would i be better diving straight in like i did in the first draft?
Coming Out, Fox, Gay, Raccoon, Romance
So thinking this short, whose first draft was about 700 words, was really good and wanting to encourage everyone to give it a read, i decided to stretch it a little and make it its own submission. right call? cheating?
Ass, Butt, City, Exhibitionism, Glass chair, MLP, Micro, My Little Pony, POV, Pony, Vagina, gentle, giantess, loom
I'm way ahead in writing out the first draft but there may be more cameos in the future.
Tags, Two of them
Patrick goes to his second job, even if he should stay home and heal
the is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book planned in a trilogy.
Bulldog, Drama, Gay, Male, Story Progression, Tiger, injuries, no sex
#1 of suichi's inferno
kyria shinzy and suichi bezelius © armand zimmerman (me)
giné callarant © coryn ragsdale
first draft: december, 2005.
current draft submitted july 19th, 2005.
Fox, Hermaphrodite, Husky, Near Future
#9 of black project files first draft
black files projects chapter #5
crossbreeding program report file #5
december 16, 1933 6:30am: wikenberg woke up with annabel still in his arms, she smiles at him she kisses him deeply, she holds him tight as
Anubis, Bathing, Character Development, Deep Penetration, Dragon, Fondling, M/F, Military, Story Progression, Tail, Violence (Not In Yiff)
She had once attempted at writing a piece to justify the independence alliance's position to declare war, but when she looked back at her first draft, she knew that there was no way she could do so. not when she knew.
Feline, Female, Friendship, Golden Retriever, Male, No-Yiff, Plot Development, Rebellion, Sci-Fi, Space, War, conflict
#74 of legacy of the veiled stars
maybe i am rushing this now that i am revealing the answers to mysteries that have been throughout the entire story series but i am a bit eager to finish the first draft of this series so i can start editing it.
Arctic Fox, Fight, Fox, Male, Meerkat, Red Fox, Springhare, Stoat, marten, pine marten, spring hare
Remember, this is still taken from the first draft so some things are liable to change during editing. and don't forget to let me know what you think!
**chapter one**
the forest whispered to me, and i howled in reply.
Transformation, Werewolf, full moon, sequel, teaser, werewolves
This is a sketch/first draft of the story and so is very weak in structure right now.
Armour, Camp, Cobra, Cougar, Destruction, Dragon, Ferain, Fox, Keelya, Rebellion, Sakari, Shack, Snake, Staff, Sword, Village, Vixen, Wolf, Wolfess, Zerataph, bow, katana, mountain lion, spirit, world
I don't remember if i have said this before on this site, but these stories that i am posting is essentially a first draft.
Fantasy, Magic, Story, Wolf, Wolfen
So i thought i'd release the first draft of chapter one, and continue the story next month. this chapter is a bit exposition heavy, but hopefully setting up a night of fun that you'd be interested in reading about.
i hope you enjoy!
Canine, Chapter, Deer, Lioness, Nosex, Shortstory, Story, Truth-or-dare