Liaisons, part 2
#6 of casino nights this chapter has had the most significant re-writing so far. i went back corrected a few things, but most importantly- i added some new scenes that are important to the upcoming chapters.
Chapter One: First Date
I felt that i was lacking in confidence back then so now that i have more experience i decided to re-write it a little bit. most of it will stay the same but you'll notice the changes if you read the first version. hope you enjoy it.
The Department: Chapter 5: Stormbound.
#6 of the department: everything or nothing 2020 re-write. as a delayed distress call reaches jorek and the others they're forced to act quickly in time to save one of their own. but could it be already too late...?
Cybera - an erotic cyberpunk thriller - Chapter 14
"you didn't really think a forced re-write of some basic memories would work, did you?" he asked, trying to keep his voice steady. the captain stepped closer. "a surface-level personality recoding" jabbed luke, "child's play.
Prologue & Foreword
I threatened to re-write child of the sands into a publisher friendly young adult fantasy novel (and actually get it published!) and now, i'm here to display the early fruits of that labor.
Good to be Queen: Homecoming
No backup and i don't feel like spending the hours to re-write them for now. sorry everyone! all that's left is a weak 2-paragraph draft of the next story, good to be queen: surprise.
Future Sanctuary - Chapter 11: Arrivals and Departures
#11 of future sanctuary (well, it's taken longer then i hoped, several re-writes, and the chapter is shorter than usual, but i hope you all enjoy this little tidbit on the future sanctuary storyline.)
Apocalypse, Ch. 1
I'm re-writing and finishing "apocalypse". so leave a comment, because i love comments, and don't forget to fav or vote if you liked it.
Carnal Saga, Tyrgerian Dropship
I just felt like dropping in for a bit and giving you part of a story (more a teaser), before i submit the rest of this story along with all the re-written stories of before (more editing, but some may need a re-write).
Carrying On is Hard to Do
I don't intend to re-write it, though... it's far too personal for that. normal disclaimers and warnings for such material apply. furry is copyright to the relevant person(s). no nibbling!
Forbidden Chapter 15
This has been a complete and total re-write. i wrote this, from beginning to end over the last couple of days, because it was one of a small few chapters of forbidden i was unhappy with.
Carnal 004: Ominous
#4 of carnal if i had to give one sign of a well written story, it's that when one goes back with the intention of re-writing, they find it was perfect the first time. this one is, as of yet, the closest story i have to absolute perfection.