StarFox Universe [R]aid: 01 Nothing is Routine Anymore
A critical head shot. taking a glance over at falco's target, he was astonished to see that there was no hint of impact. he heard the avian cursing, his weapon shattered and the feathers on his hand lightly burnt.
Starborne - Adrift in a Sea of Stars: Out of the Dark
Meanwhile, a deadly threat for the ship manifests itself as one of its fusion reactors approaches a critical overload. ## chapter 2 adrift in a sea of stars per aspera ad astra.
Stabbed in the Back
criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated. hello, and good day, my heart you did slay. i loved you, truly, you left me, unruly. you were the love of my life, now a memory of strife.
A Chance Encounter part two
I hope you enjoy, and once again i welcome criticism. i absolutely adore writing and would love to improve. * * * ornoth is my own character, snowie belongs to my boyfriend who i love ever so much
Valentines day gift
Let's see what all you critics think. :p learning what it means, only to have all the doors closed, vainly i waited. everyday i fought, over and over again, finally at end. meeting one so pure, you picked me up with such ease.
Fakeman AMA
Got any general criticisms or things you wish i'd stop doing? let me know. want to engage in conversation from anything between idle banter and limerick competitions? let's do this!
replaced
Got bored so tried to write a poem. constructive criticism welcomed. you told me you cared for me you said you'd never leave me; was that all lies? did i really mean that little that you could walk away so easy?
Double Birthday Surprises ch. 1
"critical strike!!" he pounced directly on top of him, knocking him flat on his back; then bit him fiercely in the chest, revealing his weak spot.
Club Singapore-Part 1-Puss Out of Boots
This is my first story so be nice and constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. send it to [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection) i am also making a website called studdlyduddlydoo's new to furrydom because i'm new to furrydom.
The Dark Pact
Thanks to water neko for her helpful criticism! and because of it, i am going to switch from 1st person view, to third. i apologize if this confuses anyone, and i hope the story is just as enjoyable! if not, leave me a comment saying so!
Hell Jumpers, part two
I'd rather have criticism then praise, so put plenty of it (constructure criticism please).
Highschool - Fitting In and Living Life Ch 4: The Sleepover
All criticism is good criticism; tell me how to make my writing better and i'll try to improve it so. i know it was short, if doing so wouldn't mean having to re-submit, i would turn it all into one chapter.