Lost Pokemon Episodes: Episode 13 Royal Seafront Assult
Vinzith attacks again but trips again this time hurting himself critically. eleckid take this time to land a good punch on vinzith causing the plant pokémon to become more exhausted.
Starborne - Adrift in a Sea of Stars: Out of the Dark
Meanwhile, a deadly threat for the ship manifests itself as one of its fusion reactors approaches a critical overload. ## chapter 2 adrift in a sea of stars per aspera ad astra.
Stabbed in the Back
criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated. hello, and good day, my heart you did slay. i loved you, truly, you left me, unruly. you were the love of my life, now a memory of strife.
A Chance Encounter part two
I hope you enjoy, and once again i welcome criticism. i absolutely adore writing and would love to improve. * * * ornoth is my own character, snowie belongs to my boyfriend who i love ever so much
Valentines day gift
Let's see what all you critics think. :p learning what it means, only to have all the doors closed, vainly i waited. everyday i fought, over and over again, finally at end. meeting one so pure, you picked me up with such ease.
Fakeman AMA
Got any general criticisms or things you wish i'd stop doing? let me know. want to engage in conversation from anything between idle banter and limerick competitions? let's do this!
replaced
Got bored so tried to write a poem. constructive criticism welcomed. you told me you cared for me you said you'd never leave me; was that all lies? did i really mean that little that you could walk away so easy?
DC Criminal Profile: Mire
Unbeknownst to his critics in hawaii and perhaps even to maleko himself, he had been using this power over water for years to increase his surfing prowess.
Algerian Speed (part 2)
Having one of our drivers criticize his or her own team in public and in front of media will be against the terms of contract and it can be punishable by fine or even suspension, depending on the severity."
Game On
Not just criticism, he could handle criticism if it was coming from someone who knew what the fuck they were talking about. but des, he just kept going on and on about how the lion was too old for the game now.
Hell Jumpers, part two
I'd rather have criticism then praise, so put plenty of it (constructure criticism please).
The Dark Pact
Thanks to water neko for her helpful criticism! and because of it, i am going to switch from 1st person view, to third. i apologize if this confuses anyone, and i hope the story is just as enjoyable! if not, leave me a comment saying so!