A few random updates!
In fact i welcome any advice for ways to improve my stories and will take all of them into consideration.
DC Profile: Mighty Steel
Barrows' strength has steadily improved and he has developed a mnemonic talent that allows him to copy nearly any physical action immediately after only a single viewing.
Avery’s Awakening
I'm no flake, and i'm always looking to improve my writing.
Five
Any run down slum was flooded with a volunteer force of the young and donations of material to build and improve.
Reflections
Hope y'all're doing okay, and hopefully life improves for all of us. :) edit: i done goofed and uploaded this as a story instead of a journal. no way to change it, so i'll have to set it hidden soon.
Batter Up [PTRN][RWD]
He could take solace in the fact that his batting average had improved dramatically over the course of his training; he'd never had been able to hit a .500 when he first started.
Family Exile
"besides, once we find our home you will improve and you can hear me snarl and moan about the work that needs to be done to set up a lair of our own."
The Wolf and the Sheep
Over a period of just two weeks she'd improved by almost three feet, and that was just her. nearly everyone of the girls at s:t ma... rupture institute had improved immensily in their athletical performance.
Co-Workers Ch. 3
And it looks like that's not the only thing that's improved for you as well." the doctor tapped her chart.
Prisoners of War – Separation
"having that thing certainly hasn't improved your personality," sardo said. _stomp. stomp. stomp._ "not yours either, i could say."
Zion - Light of the New Moon (Pre-Start 2/3)
If ever a character's major fatigue exceeds his or her mettle sub-trait they collapse, faint, or otherwise stop trying, unable to further contribute until their situation improves.
Spring Cats
The tiger can only hope that tomorrow he can find some way to improve his lot on this vacation. perhaps that black jaguar...