Vexen's Own Story!
I cheered as i kicked him out into oncoming traffic, watching kiyotoe platter against the windshield of a semi-truck as it went out of control, causing a massive traffic jam and many commas to be used in a single sentence as a baby was thrown off an interstate
Hurting
Submission_id=298421) commas separate entries. underscores join words eg: fox, male, robin\_hood. **read the [keywording policy](http://wiki.inkbunny.net/wiki/keyword_policy)**. details [edit](https://inkbunny.net/submissionedit.php?
SRK Sex on the First Date (Short Story)
At least i put in the commas >xd. its short but enjoy it if its your thing. the point is to thoroughly ponder the scenario, and to expand your imagination to visualize in whats going down.
W.O.L.F. 3 - Ravenwing and Stillfire
- no, it just stopped accelerating. - i sensed the pressure in my spine. - a bit below zero comma nine and falling at natural rate. i'd say natural gravity on this altitude.
Weird Writings
I think capitalization and the pierod and commas get used somewhere too but i don't remember where and it worries me. ill place periods where i think theygo notepad is getting me more red errors and blue errors but theyre not always right.
Virgin Virus - Ch4: Fear
He still remained there, in his comma. i sigh. - "godspeed, boys." - the doctor shouts. yun mounts carl over his shoulders, and the three of us slip into the portal. ...
Special Assignments - Chapter Thirty Eight
Endings aren't always a period or a full stop, sometimes they are a comma. it's a pause, time to reflect, and then you await what's on the other side. it's a philosophy i've tried to live with."
a Werewolfs love - chapter 2
He has slipped into a comma and the doctors fear he may die from loss of blood." steve just sat there staring at the man 'my parents are dead! and my brother might as well be dead.' he thought.
Movie Previews
I know my grammar is a bit lacking and i tend to use to many commas and ands. i also know i don't go greatly into character detail. is there anything else i should know? any tips?
Twist Ending
I use, commas uncorrectly. thats why i has failed english. "what are you doing?" "what does it look like einstein?" "discovering gravity?" "of course." i killed my past sel- error 404 - paradox found. ... looper was awesome. food is my kryptonite.
Wishes
We rest our heads for these poor souls and hope the german shepherd recovers from the comma. justice will be served" ray jumps up as he reads the last words; he puts on his shoes and runs to the car.
Genetic Children-Log 05- Hi! I am...
(also i typed this while my house temperature was at -2 degrees c, forgive any errant commas and weird punctuation...please?) on with the show! the door to korm's lab opened as he swiped his thumb on the small lcd screen outside.