Bad Bois Home Alone! ~Part Two!
Any comments and even constructive crits are welcomed, and you can find the beginning scene published earlier!
Circumstance part 5
... crits, suggestions, etc. are welcome thanks for reading, and hope you enjoy :-) 13 sid was wandering the basement in search of the mailroom. he was shown where it was during his orientation, yesterday, but the building was labyrinthine.
Bad Bois Home Alone! ~Part Three!
Any comments and even constructive crits are welcomed, and you can find the beginning scenes published earlier!
Nature's Story: Epilogue
I'd like to thank all of you for reading this, and for all the kind words you've said :3 i'd also like to give a big thanks to octoberflixard, who helped me with helpful suggestions and crit throughout all of this work... well, until this bit.
First works to write, hopefully a beginning to a beginning
Its a odd way of writing up one but it seemed better in my head...any crit would be welcome and just in case anyone is curious. everyone in the crash was fine. and i didnt go with them because i did want to watch a stargate series that was
Shh! They'll hear you!
. :3 there may or may not be some typo errors and such, since i didnt give this a full read-through upon completion (i dislike doing that.) so dont go too hard on me there, otherwise, feel free to comment or crit as you see fit!
Realms of Valeron - Chapter 15
Gunnar, frenzy when the boss hits thirty per cent and if roka keeps his crits on cooldown, you'll be fine. any questions?" "i don't understand any of that" said biggie. sycorax replied, "just shoot it and you'll be fine."
The Treeflower Oddyssey: Chapter 1 - The Beginning.
I really appreciate any feedback, either comments or crits, so feel free to leave some and i'll be sure to get back to you! let me know what you think and i'll be really grateful. :) enjoy! ~r.r
Payday part 2
crits, comments, etc. welcome. hope ya'll enjoy :-) chapter 3: noel's watch "but why do i have to watch him first?" noel whined at warren. "because now is the easiest shift. lester will probably be asleep the entire time."
The Red Star: Chapter 1
I want real crits, stuff that i could fix, meaning sentence structure, word usage, ect, ect. like i said, no bullshit. if you really think this is only 1 star you damn well rate it that way.
A Twist Atop The Spire (Rolls Included)
Outcome table crit fail: 1-3 fail: 4-10 pass: 11-17 crit pass: 18-20 characters **rupert** : a young otter paladin standing a bit short at 4 '9, he is around 24.
Courtship 16: Gym Exertions
It's a very personal story for me, and it's important to me that i see it through to it's completion.also holy crit, is this the only upload of courtship i've done all year?wow.