Payday part 3
Onward and upward and all that :-) crits and whatnot are always welcome. hope you like! chapter 5: connecting the car skidded to a halt, throwing up a cloud of dirt and loose gravel.
Stealing a Kiss Chapter 1 R
The student is in crit..." the wolf had dragged himself out of bed far enough to turn the annoying alarm off.
A Fox Behind Bars part 30
Any crits or comments are welcome, too 30. i got sunday's note from one of the pack's messengers while i stood in the breakfast line, arguing with a ferret.
Hit the Showers
Constructive crit welcome. "no way, dude." the possum rested his cheek on his right paw and his left paw on his hip, lying sideways in the huge armchair. "c'mon alex , i really want you to come with me to the gym." "nope.
When Fates Collide – Chapter 1 "Running From Nothing"
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A Fox Behind Bars part 10
Really hope you fellas dig this any crits and comments are always welcome :-) thank you for reading! 10. dimitri nudged the lump on the floor. "did you kill him?" i asked. "he's not dead, yet."
In depth exam
As always constructive crit. is always appreciated, as well as suggestions for future works. it had been three years sense i'd seen dr.
Tales from the Foxhole: Chapter 6
The snake was cut up into sections, and below the picture of the dice, it said, "crit or die". it was one of adam's favorite shirts, and the bleach stains showed off how much it had been through the wash.
The Idiot Witch
Completely eliminating most players' and enemies' abilities to sneak attack or ambush crit him and his allies was well worth the drain on his mana restoration. now... what would happen if he "accidentally" turned it off...?
Roll With It
"you crit, mistress." kathoey explained, "and since you're orc-blooded, you get an extra die to roll." "oh. cool," tabitha grabbed her d12 and rolled it three times, "so that's like 22 damage. what now?"
Fuck like rabbit's
"get over here so i can crit you." leo giggled as he bent over, sam reaching up and kissing his cheek four times. "hey, you only get three attacks at your boyfriend level." "well maybe i'm just a rebel."
Chapter 1: A Game?
"looks like crits are a thing!" he called out. "yeah!" kelrith said, ducking under a slow swing while thrusting up towards the undead's head, again the creature died in one strike.