Day 23) Cruel

Gonna tell me that i missed a comma in my rhetorical essay!? or fucking which nose play-dopehead fucked airestoatle with? forget it, i am the head of the fucking varsity team.

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Immorality - Kayla's Lesson

I know i overuse commas xd i can't help myself.

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POV vore - you, M'ress and Yellowstripe (UB)

It has a pattern of dots and commas tattooed on it. it's still an ear despite its appearance and yellowstripe chuckles. "you aren't the first to think that," he growls. "you also aren't the first to think hazel is a good target.

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Furrie's First Adventure: a lurid thought experiment

Try to be more descriptive, tell me how you feel, and don't use so many commas. here, like this:" she turned around to smirk at me; one paw slid its way down to her already revealing panties, and slid them down partway.

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Brandon And Minda

"it seemed they'd put a young boy in a comma because he said he say the dragoness, only to find it wasn't." i was shocked, "the boy was only five..." my teeth grinded together, monsters; that's the only word i could call them.

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The Hardest Part

He didn't mean, i'm not a faggot, comma, like you. he meant, i'm not a faggot like you. he knew how the rest of this evening could go. had gone, more than once in the past. a night of sticky passion, followed by daniel's guilt at betraying jake.

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The Magic Mirror Maze

Next he lifted jaxxy into the air who was dozing off to sleep from the milk comma he was in. jaxxy's diaper was already soaked again but gator decided it could wait until they got home. turning around, gator saw the large exit sign of the mirror maze.

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The Predators of Rome: Doll's Eye

I'm seeing a lot of my old self, myself that tried too hard to be gritty and violent. x3 myself that kept forgetting to use commas before the start of each dialogue, that left a lot of participles dangling like a new york gay bar.

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Lantaria: Search for Enlightenment. Ep1. The Finding

I was giving her an all-out passion-filled pheromone-stimulating comma-state-inducing whalloping whoppa'! you know what the worst part was? the most embarrassing a-a-and worst thing ever was? i was starting to like it.

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Law

His nose triangular, sharp to a point with thin comma-shaped nostrils that looked like they could fume flames. ears erected, keenly tapered proudly, and if it were not for the stern expression on the anubian jackal's face, perhaps he was quite handsome.

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Birthday Surprises, For TakenByMe

I closed my eyes as she climbed on my chest, planting kisses from my soaked nether regions up to my tummy, quickly nipping at both my breasts (comma!) before reaching my neck and finally my lips.

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