Feeling Foxy
"because i caught brian and brianna losing their virginity to each other", melissa commented.
Joel Earns a D - Part 3
comments are welcome. i gave myself a deadline to submit this and i rushed a bit near the end, so comments about edits especially welcome. all the characters are completely fictitious.
Of Father's and Son's
Oddly enough it was the only time jason excused himself from the table not wanting to hear their racial bias comments. a lot of beer was drank and more food was consumed and even worst dirty jokes were told.
Problem Solved (Doe TF/TG) [TRADE]
Cheryl comments with a small giggle. "you're oddly okay with this..." karen commented. "hey, it's going to be a whole new experience! shampoos gonna be a lot more important though..." she adds with a giggle.
Chapter 10
Delta comments, releasing the last clamp and moves out of the way so raikes can get out of the chopper, and the mech. "it was ok.
Maggie's Decision
"sounds like a good idea to me", max commented softly as he let go of me so that we could get dressed and have breakfast.
life with a dragon trouble on the road re write
Berrwain comments as i sit down. "not yet. give me the hot sauce" i reply as i hold my hand out. moments later berrwain hands over a bottle of hot sauce.
Corsi INC 22
Thirty commented. "keep her. but on one condition..." calli commented. "two actually." "and what conditions?" "you find a boyfriend." calli commented.
When Bark Turns to Bite- Clubbing and meeting old Masters
The husky commented. drake's earflap wiggled a bit as he caught the husky's comment. he thought it wasn't a good one to say about his risuke, but when risuke teased his earflap he couldn't be angry as he felt his whole body shiver again.
When bark turns to bite- The Collar
He said that to show he was listening to risuke's comment about his clothes earlier. risuke nodded, "how about neon purple, master?" he suggested grinning lightly. "master? one question.... about her comment." he sighed.
Changes: Chapter 2
"ugh, i can't believe i got my but kicked by a giant frog" "turtle" raph commented "whatever" casey shot back. "look.
Mine Control
"what do you mean woolrich has been kidnapped," one man commented. "it was by those pesky otters again, sir," another commented. "i heard them going on and on about their dams being destroyed."