Canvas and Melody - Prologue
I intend to do daily uploads until this story is finished, any and all comments and critiques are welcome!
Prologue: The Vessel and the Immortal
Please, leave a comment if you are at all interested, or pm me if you have a critique! cheers! please note that this is a mature story and not for the easily offended. credit to vallhund for the awesome ref sheet/icon!!
Jamie Character Sketch
Yesterday, my friend littlebat posed a weekend writing challenge in a telegram group i'm in, and critique is optional.
Transformative Works
An otter, offended at his foxy friend's critiques against his writing, finds that a pen that a certain lynch gave him has some interesting abilities. please comment and fav, it does help a lot (even if me asking makes me sound like a youtuber).
Bigger, Badder... Crazier
Barbara & eddy (grey wolves)- restaurant critiques; both well known in canada. "we've visited the restaurant tommy & regina opened after the last race," barbara says, "we gave it 5 out of 5 stars." "i still think the spices were a bit much."
Sins + Virtues Part 1: His Slothful Daughter
The time on Rich's alarm clock showed 9:00 when he woke up, this was the second time that week that he was late. Ever since his wife, Molly, was promoted at her job she had to work late hours meant that there was very little time for any fun that they...
Project Warblade: Chapter 1
Any critique, comments, favorites, or anything else will help greatly. i'll be working on chapter two sometime tomorrow and i'd really love to know how i can improve! and yes, this was imported from my fa.
Watching Your Language
If you are able to find a good web site that is willing to critique you then you will have a very good chance of becoming a great writer.
The Impure (DRAFT 1)
Please give me critique, however do not be rude about it, i know it needs a lot of work.
The Marked Ones - Arc 0: Chapter 1 - Before the Storm
I'm just so... tired" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ _sorry if it seems short, but like i said i'm still thinking about the details of the chapters_ _feel free to review and constructively critique =
Writer's Block
I'd like to add that i'm free to proofread, critique or write. feel free to ask. =========================================================================================== "if only i had a way to start this!!!"
Puppy Love Chapter 4
I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded._ a knock on the doorway behind me caught my attention. i turned around to see my bedroom door open.