I like to see a third person story where a character's thoughts and speech habits flow through the narration.
ABDL, Babyfur, Diapers, History, Husky, Rabbit, Story, diaperfur, fetish, furry, infantilism, interview, messing, wetting, writing
He could breathe a sigh of relief, but there was still more to this cave..." she continued in her narration voice, carefully setting him down onto his footpaws, though the booties left him a bit unsteady still.
ABDL, Baby bouncer, Battle, Bedroom, Bondage, Cave, Chastity, Chastity Device, Chastity cage, Deevolution, Delphox, Diaper, Diapers, Dungeon, F/M, Female, Femdom, Gag, Hypnosis, Kidnapping, Lucario, M/F, Magic, Male, Male/Female, Mind Control, Mittens, Pacifier gag, Pokemon, Riolu, Short, Telepathy, Transformation, Wet, booties, bouncer, brainwashing, mitt, pacifier, wetting, wizard
The narrator is basically me, but it's first person, so the narrator can be anyone who reads this.
the pred is obviously male, thats about the only detail.
and the vore is soft and oral.
all in all, someone gets eaten, and someone eats them.
Alive, Awesome, Belly, Bulge, Clean, Devoured, Eaten Alive, Gobbled Up, Gulped, Gulped Down, Human Food, Human Meal, Human Prey, Human Snack, Male, Master/Pet, Master/Slave, Muscle, Muscles, Narrator, Oral, Pats, Predator/Prey, Sexy, Story, Survives, Swallowed Alive, Swallowed Whole, Unharmed, Vore (soft), belly bulge, eaten, gets, mouth, person, protect, rubs, safe, stomach, strong, swallowed, tounge, vore
Only if the situation makes it illogical for a first person narrative, then it will shift to a more traditional third person narrative.
if you decide to read this, i invite you to read the prologue first. it's just 2 pages, so it won't take long.
Fox, Husky, Male, Sci-Fi, Space
And what follows is the result of what happens when one side is so deranged that they run with a narrative when things don't go their way, even when that narrative flies in the face of facts.
Battle, Fight, Magic, arena, wind
Will shrunk back into his computer chair with a shrug, "unfortunately, dialogue just isn't an option; it has to be narration. i just have to make that narration better."
Anal, Brothers, Bunny, Canine, Dog, Double-Penetration, Gay, Husky, Incest, M/M, M/M/M, Rabbit, Threesome, huskies
Transcript 10 dec 53
program 'exposé'
narrator: due to the disturbing nature of this report, we encourage those of you viewing with old or young persons to change to a lighter programme for the next ten minutes.
Assimilation, Cock, Corruption, F/F, Female, Fox, Infested, Insect, Latex, Lion, Male, Mask, Mind Control, Mouse, Oral, Prostitution, Sci-Fi, Slime, Slug, Squick, Transformation, Worm, brain, ear, host, infest, infestation, mouth, parasite, plastic, takeover, tf
#2 of wolf: the legendary half breed
**narrator pov**
the sun was slowly rising as it was now morning and the starly's were singing their beautiful songs. there in bed was one pokemon, a riolu named aurora and a 21 year old man, wolf sanchez.
Adventure, Human, Lucario, M/F, Pokemon, Riolu, Romance, Violence
Dam narrating: i changed right there into me, a dragon theo knows all too well. thus that disbelief in his words starting with "on no"
hoover: what's worse is that you guessed right. she's going to have a child and it's mine.
Dragon, Hoover Dam, Meadow dome, No-Yiff, Simon1fox, Underage, sci/fi
narrators are not even human - they're sprites." - philip pullman
thursday's prompt
carrier
8/28/2018
the guards stood watch over the shape on the floor. bound and gagged it wasn't going far.
"do you think it's contagious?" doug asked.
Carrier, Carriers, Contagion, Creative, Fox, Foxes, Prompt, Story, Thursday, idea, writing