Zootopia In-Depth Review

A film must have a good story to be considered great. some of the best films may even portray the story of the climate of the world at the time they were released.

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Only Human 3.5 (Optional chapter)

A lot of sex clutters up a good story. but being the pervert that i am, i enjoy writing bits of smut like the following one. this takes place in the middle of chapter three, during the prison riots. really, it works well as a standalone too.

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Winter's Apex: Ch 4 - A Moment of Silence

At least down the road it'll be a good story to tell. thanks." palmer turned to see apex sitting up on his elbows, smiling back. "no problem" said palmer, replacing his paw on apex thigh.

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Wasteland Survivor – Emergence - ch23

If you want a good story of romance and love and guns and furs and and and.... go back to the start and begin reading, this chapter brings the story to ninety nine pages and just shy of fifty thousand words.

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The Best Christmas Present(Rough Draft)

Not a good story compared to my others, though i kind of liked it myself, as i said at the top. i just hope you enjoyed it :)

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Holiday fun

 this is to holiday lurker however when commenting be nice and give criticism if it's something bad like misused punctuation orâ somewhere needs to be tell me nicely like say something like good story overall but bad punctuation dont be rude

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The Legend: chapter one; a bad morning

I promise, just right now i had to get the feeling of where it was going to go. but as you can tell, vikings and gun wielding attackers will make for a good story.. once it begins! bwahaha! you know the drill, rate and comment.)

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Writing Tips vol. 3

That's just plain good story-telling. otherwise, the thing you've drawn attention to becomes irrelevant, and turns into a plot hole. the key is to determine which elements are chekhov's guns and which are not.

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My Highschool Dream Love - Part 11

I got the a pretty good story to tell." i said. "alright." she said. i told them everything. i was interupted periodically and asked questions. i answered them honestly. i once again left the blowjob out though.

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Sick Hearts

So, i actually had a damn good story fully planned and in the works of writing, but then skate messaged me five minutes later with "whup, sry, you get the glory hole. have fun!" ... damn, but the dungeon one would have been fucking brilliant. oh well.

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A night to remember pt1

I find i use up all my good story ideas in this format now, and it is helped along by the talented cerine. once more in the [flexible survival](http://flexiblesurvival.com/index?

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Zion: Light of the New Moon Part 2, Ch 4.1 Doen

It was one thing to appreciate a good story, but another entirely to miss the obvious answer... the one that dillan recognized right away, "this is a bargaining session." "a what?" haldyn questioned.

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