I Don't Know How To Love
It was rejected due to the poem being too long and rambled. the following is the new rewrite after their notes. hope you enjoy and have a nice day. forgive me for i don't know how to love. you wouldn't think it would be that tough.
Alphys Höek CHAPTER 6
Alphys rambled psychotically, struggling to hold herself together as she began to visualize a perfect dotted-line reference point with which to literally saw mettaton's overinflated, egotistical head clean off. "just...one...quick...twist!
Feathers for Mr. Ollivander
Ollivander was not an old man yet and yet he already rambles like one. or was this common with wandmakers in general? he couldn't tell. in any case, he sure wished for a pair of earmuffs. - are you done?
Introducing Espiona
Easy, while i was rambling about my past, i was undoing my bindings. you guys need to work on your knots.
Lockdown Ch. 1 - How it began
While she rambled on about humans and pantherans having unfair laws, i saw him lean forward from the desk and just yell. "hey, svetlana, can you stop being a freakin' social justice warrior over there!?
Terrible Creature Short
I dunno, just rambling i suppose, but let me know what you think, if you would be so kind, and if i like the response i get, i may be keen to make more, but we'll see....
Gravity
I ramble. also, tell me how i did; i tend not to emote, so i don't know how good i do in conveying emotion.
Apocalypse book Chapter 1
Were kidnapped...yes i know you were suspended...no i cant send help...because the buildings have laws...i've got to go," jake closed the hologram and walked around, thankful that he isn't in god's army, and thankful he only has to listen to his brother's ramblings
lurking in the shadows
"quiet my parents are probably home by now and there gonna wake up if you keep rambling around like that!" she whispered loudly. "sorry." he said quietly. "crap... how am i going to explain this to my mom."
Kabuto: Chapter three the Last Goodbye
I got to town and they were alll gathered around this one guy who was rambling on about a wolf man. he told everyone he might be dead but it is highly doughted that he is dead.
I've Made Up Your Mind
I turn around and continue on my way, pull out a cigarette and light it, enjoying his pointless ramblings about how i'm a worthless faggot. it's a wonderful day.
The Story of the Khajiit: A Compendium
But my ramble has carried long enough. time to move on.