Avian: A web serial
So yeah, i hope you all enjoy and please leave your critiques! alright, my first day of writing in this thing... hm, i really can't say that i know what to write.
The fruits of her labor
Special thanks to my helper, critique guy, formatter, proofer, etc: kanohaninja amongst the roots of a great tree a lone grey wolf lay with her back to the trunk.
[$] Weregarurumon Day
Comments, critiques, and suggested tags always appreciated. i also love faves and ratings. i'm open for commissions! check my profile. if you consistently enjoy my work, consider becoming a backer on my patreon, or you can buy me a coffee on my ko-fi!
A different kind of training - part 1
Comments, critiques, and advice are always welcome. happy reading! ;) disclaimer: i do not own pokemon. they are owned by some big corporation that i don't care to remember.
Birth of A Captain Ch1: Snow Moon (November)
Reviews and critiques are very welcome.
Welcome to the Dorms
critique is welcome as are commissions if you like what what you see. it was the usual day at the end of summer. hot, but starting to cool down compared to the last heatwave everyone has been complained about.
Tales of Torrnal: Chapter 2
Please comment and critique! been a long while since i've written.
Clipped Winged Crow
And critique me, i don't bite. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ i've got a crow sitting on my window tapping, begging to be let in so many treat him like an angel and, god, hes a beautiful sin i've got a spider in my
Vacation Souvenirs—Chapter 2
As always, creepy and wholesome comments, questions, feedback, and constructive critiques are always welcome and appreciated, and i hope you enjoy reading this as much as i enjoyed writing it! thanks so much!
Path of the Lion (Prologue)
Lion as i mentioned in the last upload, i've had my reservations about uploading this anywhere because the kingdoms enjoined trilogy is something that i really intend to be my magnum opus, but i finally decided that uploading it here and getting some critique
One Small Life - Part 1: Waking to the Sound of Thunder...
As always, comments and critique are greatly appreciated! _the sound of thunder echoed in the distance. scrambling and screaming, lost in the blackness, the soft, smothering abyss on all sides, heavy and choking.
Pawford Personalities, Ch 1: Spaghetti and Meatball
"it was a little over-the-top." she stated, but the critique ended there as their food finally arrived, "next time stick with de-worming." "worms?" dot gasped, "eeewwww!" "yea, maggie... 'eewww'!"