A Better Friendship--Chapter 1: Reconnecting
Constructive critisism welcome! like, reeeaaallly welcome. it was an early wednesday morning in the middle of jay's summer break. he would be entering his sophomore year of high school when it started up again.
Foxtail Elementary: Chapter 1
I love critisism of all kinds, so please don't hold back.** _ _ **please enjoy, and be patient as the second chapter is developed. i've fallen in love with this story, and i do hope that you will too. thank you for reading!
An Act of Kindness
He shouted well, hope you enjoyed it ^^ .......and i'd really like feedback from my readers, tell me what you thought =3 .........all forms of critisism will be taken into consideration xd .......thanks
Taking care of your Brother
Comments and constructive critisism is appreciated. note that english is not my primary language, so some spelling errors may occur.
Halloween with Momma Kitty: Chapter 1 ~ UNFINISHED
Please enjoy and comments and critisism is apreceated. especially posative ones. enjoy!
The House Dahan part II: Chen's second day, part 1
Once again i urge anyone with constructive critisism to come out with it. so once again we shall assume you've not accidentally made a profile on an obviously adult site and opened this story. let's give your intellectual capacity that much credit.
The Thief
Please, give me some constructive critisism, i like that. well that is all. i hope you'll like the adventure of my dear argonian.
Losing/The Fortress
critisism is again welcome, glad some of you liked the first one. hello bro, having fun were we?
First Steps: The Way It Is
Thank you guys all for reading it, and constructive critisism will be helpful okay well here it is.
Boys Like You Chapter Two: The Chemicals Between Us
Even if he was hated by all the girls and critisized, no one would deny he was sexy. the boy that could even seduce the straightest guys in school had to be.
Mysterious visit
Bulbasaur didn't take too kindly to the critisism of his trainer however, as he released a small stun spore in scav's direction paralyzing the poor dragon. "ack...i was just trying to help..."
Summer Nights - Chapter One
Allrighty all, this is my first story, so please, lay the critisism on heavy, that's the only way that i'll get better. hoping to make a sequal to this, eventually, i guess we'll see. enjoy!