Omake 2: Breaking a Sweat
The characters in this story (except the oc-insert) are © chalodillo **omake 2: breaking a sweat** **beta-reader: ant0nius** vixy had a plan.
After Dark, Part 2, Chapter 2 - "Let me explain"
Feel free. :)_ _from time to time, i need beta readers and editors for my stories. if you'd like to be one, or just want to ask a question or tell me something privately, email me at tigger2051 at google mail!
Watcher of Arceus chapter 8
Original author: the shadow master of weapons beta reader / co-author: catsithx xxx chapter 8 thomas stood still, looking at the bullet that had been caught inside the light green wall that radara had put up.
04 - Organism 8008
\beta reader for this story. if anyone is interested, please leave a comment or send me a message.\> "dialogue" 'thoughts' * * * "so this is my life now?"
Fertility Fix: Barnyard Breeding
Special thanks to [@zenphoenix81](/u/zenphoenix81) for this input and for being a great beta reader! trudging down the dusty farm road, my paws scuffing against the gravel, i couldn't shake off the sting of frustration nipping at my heart.
Pact Chapter 2: Bar Fight Part 3
Editor: jon sanders beta reader: razukai tapping on their shoulder, mortimer said. "it looks like both of you are in the wrong seats, drinking someone else's mead."
32: A Bullet to Change History
Las lindas web comic spin-off, oc-insert the characters in this story (except the oc-insert) are © chalodillo **chapter 32: a bullet to change history** **beta-reader: ant0nius** ‘ **unknown pov’** this was not how i expected my life to turn
Not Going Extinct 6
I volunteered to be her beta reader. i'm looking for any lingering spelling and grammatical mistakes. i'm also on the hunt for inconsistencies, continuity errors, plot holes, things like that.
Totally Orignal Science Fiction Adventure: Chapter 1
Bear with me as i currently have no beta readers to make sure my errors are minimal, but i try.
AbortUS strikes back 3
First i was incapacitated and unable to write then i hate to wait for my beta reader to do the correction :d . anyway i make this up to you by a rather unique and interesting chapter, enjoy, i know you will 3;) "and, so what do you guys think?"
Between Dreams and nightmares Beta2
Please comment at rate the work so we can go with one of the new beta readers between dreams and nightmares by ~tootall a great man once said, 'when we are first born into the world, we are born innocent.
The Volunteer Maiden, Chapter Ten
Thanks to aehs and my beta reader group for beta reading, and veralion for proofing!