Omake 2: Breaking a Sweat
The characters in this story (except the oc-insert) are © chalodillo **omake 2: breaking a sweat** **beta-reader: ant0nius** vixy had a plan.
Watcher of Arceus
beta reader/co-author : catsithx full summary: the arceus bloodline is far from an ordinary line of humans. for generations, this bloodline has been keeping watch for the return of an ancient evil.
After Dark, Part 2, Chapter 2 - "Let me explain"
. :)_ _from time to time, i need beta readers and editors for my stories. if you'd like to be one, or just want to ask a question or tell me something privately, email me at tigger2051 at google mail!
Summer FY 02 - Forbidden Love?
Note: thanks to tristan black wolf for being a beta reader and suggesting a few minor changes to make the story flow a little smoother. kris couldn't believe it! it was as if he was in a dream!
Pact Chapter 2: Bar Fight Part 3
Editor: jon sanders beta reader: razukai tapping on their shoulder, mortimer said. "it looks like both of you are in the wrong seats, drinking someone else's mead."
Watcher of Arceus chapter 8
Original author: the shadow master of weapons beta reader / co-author: catsithx xxx chapter 8 thomas stood still, looking at the bullet that had been caught inside the light green wall that radara had put up.
32: A Bullet to Change History
Las lindas web comic spin-off, oc-insert the characters in this story (except the oc-insert) are © chalodillo **chapter 32: a bullet to change history** **beta-reader: ant0nius** ‘ **unknown pov’** this was not how i expected my life to turn
Fertility Fix: Barnyard Breeding
Special thanks to [@zenphoenix81](/u/zenphoenix81) for this input and for being a great beta reader! trudging down the dusty farm road, my paws scuffing against the gravel, i couldn't shake off the sting of frustration nipping at my heart.
Totally Orignal Science Fiction Adventure: Chapter 1
Bear with me as i currently have no beta readers to make sure my errors are minimal, but i try.
Not Going Extinct 6
I volunteered to be her beta reader. i'm looking for any lingering spelling and grammatical mistakes. i'm also on the hunt for inconsistencies, continuity errors, plot holes, things like that.
AbortUS strikes back 3
First i was incapacitated and unable to write then i hate to wait for my beta reader to do the correction :d . anyway i make this up to you by a rather unique and interesting chapter, enjoy, i know you will 3;) "and, so what do you guys think?"
Between Dreams and nightmares Beta2
Please comment at rate the work so we can go with one of the new beta readers between dreams and nightmares by ~tootall a great man once said, 'when we are first born into the world, we are born innocent.