The Case of the Killer Queen (Part 1)

Feel free to critique what is here, and i will take guidance from whatever expressions are offered as to the worth of this collection of words as it stands, in determining my next move.

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What is Love? Ch 2

Comments and critique wanted!!! tell me what i don't have but need, have too little of, and have too much of!

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