#25 - Saddled With An Unstabled Partner
So long as it's legal, they'll approve it, and since he revised the marriage laws to allow for _'nonstandard partnerships'..."_ **neal:**"but...the horse is his excellency's property! how can this... _what?_ and what are these other papers?
Training session
#21 of stories a thing i wrote for someone that i thought i would have to revise multiple times to get their characters right but i got it in one so that's nice (edit note, never actually gave this a title before or after finishing it until now) it was training
The Magnum Opus - Chapter 4
The blond bear’s amber eyes flared in intensity but the revised did not move. “are you a scavenger amongst predators!?” cliff challenged.
a wolf and a vixen in love revised as a series
Just want to make one thing clear i own the rights to this story and i have revised it .blah blah anyway without any thing else to say i give you a wolf and a vixen in love chapter 1 it was a beautiful sunday morning ,and the young vixen was lying
New Commission Prices (SFW)
In the event that something happens to prevent me from completing the job within one week of the estimated finish date, i will make sure to notify the commissioner as soon as possible and work to quickly provide a revised time to completion.
Nature and Manufacture (Chapter 2 - Gates and Legalities)
The last document for the morning was marked 'dss solutions: merger proposal' which had needed a revision, her night-dark paws flipped through the pages to the place-holder on page five hundred and fifty; her name had been replaced with the less precise
Alcatraz Ch. I ~ Recruitment
Lots of new characters coming in soon, i mentioned riddick but tai's team is going through revisions into this third version. like i said thanks for reading, it means a lot!** **-djynnerate**
The Lab: A Vore Adventure (Nov 2017)
[change] when being swallowed, another key press is required to actually move to "inside (predator)" [change] zsaarr's look at text lightly revised for typos and clarity. [change] paragraphs should always/mostly have breaks now.
Desperado: Introduction
I'm only going to upload the introduction first and see what people say about it before i (probably) revise the other chapters. everything i've written so far seems devoid of something, so please tell me your likes/dislikes, or any suggestions you have.
"Daggers of Darkness" - Prologue
#6 of daggers of darkness, book 1, into the black here's the (revised) prologue for the first book of my sci-fi adventure series, "daggers of darkness, book 1, into the black".
Chapter 3: How long?
I decided to pick this up again after so long i've likely skipped some details that should be carried on from the last chapter but i don't know if i'll be writing much soon so on and off let's call this the un-revised version that if it gets somewhere i'll
Vice Admiral Ashley Dawn
She revised it naturally, but it shows even the vice admiral makes mistakes. vice admiral ashley is no ''yes man'' not by any stretch.