Only Human (revised), Chapter 3
So, here is chapter 3 of the revision of only human. enjoy. * * * the halls of the station seemed about how nathan expected, just wide enough for two to walk abreast with pristine white walls and an occasional terminal.
The Beastmaker's War - AIR
As i am sure most of you have heard, i bring a revised treaty before you this time.
#SimplyPurrfect (Revised Edition)
#3 of stories (transformation) the exact same story, but heavily revised since i'm trying to improve my writing skills. i should start from the beginning.
Evolution Complete
I snatched at the hand and pulled it between my warm wet thighs "if you want to rub something rub here" i told him and passive voice (consider revising) by my own voice...
The Lead Crown, Chapter 1-6: Malcom
With his brother and sister at odds, there would certainly be no clear-cut response to the pressing issue which meant, among other things, that he would have to revise his letter... urgently.
Snow pt 1
It's been years since i put anything to paper(so to speak) and i'm just testing the waters, if you like or if you have any useful pointers( i.e. you suck is not useful).if it's not hated to much i'll revise this later and add the rest of stories.thanks and
Writing Commissions Available (8/3/2022)
. \* i do previews, however, so if you'd like multiple sneak peeks of you work for revision and for your input, i'll gladly send you some previews for you to enjoy and give your input into.
Tropical Revised - Chapter Ten
"Are you two all packed?" questioned the wolf, Nate sneaking up behind the otters in the crowded hallway. The final bell for the school day had just wrung, and with no school following next week because of Chymerage, the students were more than excited...
An Adventure of a Life Time Chapter 1: Reality
Hello sofurry this is shade, this will be a revised version of my first chapter of this story. the title is no longer “needed trust" and is now “an adventure of a lifetime".
Luke Chapter 2 (Revisited)
#1 of luke (revisited) a revised version of an old story, bringing an old work into a new writing style.
Guardians: Downfall Chapter 1
Alright, so, went back, revised a few things, paragraphs need to be moved apart a little more, but spelling has been checked. redid and merged in chapter 1 and 2 to make chapter 1. hope you guys like it!
Tiger by the Tail (Revised)
;3 tiger by the tail (revised) written by d.j. disclaimer: zig zag is a character created by max blackrabbit, while characters tracy and stacy skunk, tina lynx, hoss, and sheila vixen are created by eric schwartz.