The Curse - 03 - The Money Shot
Even his character was changing, the letters of the script reworking and shifting, glowing golden a they changed on the page.
The Assistant's Master
We null them, and the reworked nutritional system prevents any kind of sex, to make sure that this isn't about turning people into sex toys." he sighs heavily. "so many people are obsessed with that!
The Scavenger
The muscle in his ass that had so perplexed the shadow fox spiraled down his legs as the hips, knees and ankles reworked themselves with pops and snaps beneath the tough hide he had gained.
The Founding of Tiranis, Part 2 (an Excerpt)
He crisscrossed two belts over his chest, their holsters under his arms and had reworked his belt, adding three holsters to it, just for this moment.
Nation - The Solar Republic
After several months of rebuilding and reworking the armed forces, the newly formed republic struck against the corporations by raiding command centers and corporate headquarters, crippling the corporations and seizing all assets.
OC: Jacklyn Amirr
#8 of original characters i had to rework the tags **name** :jacklyn amirr **nickname** : "jackie" by her parents, "lyn" by a small handful **age** : 38 **gender** : female **height** : 6'1 **species** : spotted-striped hyena
Meeting a Tanuki
I usually rework each question till i get it right.” “so you keep trying for a hundred?” “nineties to one hundreds, yeah.” phoebe starts to hum as she drums her fingers on the table.
The Ring
He'd always imagined the different outcomes, the different chances, fantasizing and reworking. casey, his fiance, had given him everything he needed to actualize his superpower... and he knew just where to start.
Overlord: Raise of Darkness Chapter 0 Prolog
I did consider to rework the chapter to reamove some early installment weirdness... but decided it adds a bit to the charm. pain… darkness… voices… confused memories… "where…. where am i?"
I become Rinn
When i returned, i also had renewed those friendships in earnest while reworking the house for comfort. as i gasped for breath and held my side to ease the pain, i summoned one such friend by sounding out the cry of eagles.
[Slightly Damned] Making Peace - Kazai's Scrapped POV
I then reworked most of this back into the story. see if you can spot the changes! start from https://www.sofurry.com/view/1351528 and swap over to here when the line "then she let them go, and they got to it" comes up.
01 Life Goes On - Daily Life
reworked with more detail, diversity and hopefully a least a little, or hopefully a lot better than the first time.