It accomplishes nothing except making you look like a huge douche who just rolled up in his douche-mobile and exposed his doucheness. if someone is presenting a valid criticism of your story, just take it with a grain of salt.
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Il avait une cabine de douche commune à l'extérieur, comme la cuisine et les toilettes. sa chambre se trouvait au quatrième étage, dans un petit couloir. il ouvrit sa porte et laissa ray entrer.
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Fang :
its a scented douche i picked up when i when for more beer. do you like it.
fiddle :
a douche!
you mean you douched your ass for me?
that's so sweet fang.
thank you.
oh yes fang i love the sent.
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Sachant que je ne les avaient pas avant la douche , je me suis demandã© ce que pouvait bien contenir l'eau et le shampooing dans la cabine de douche.
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Look at that douche," brad rumbled, people-watching.
jonathon turned his head, glancing in the direction of a tall badger in a pink polo, his hair chopped roughly into a stereotypical collegiate style.
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If she douched, she would douche all over her stomach, and on parts of her lower chest. she was already pissing on it, as she hadn't cared in the least.
moving her paw around, she realized, the peak of orgasm was soon coming.
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Honestly, i really didn't care, he took this way too seriously but he was a class a douche bag, a rich snobby douche bag.
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By neglecting those who care,
you are becoming what you hate;
losing even more close friends,
with every douche bag that you date.
so now for the last time,
i will tell you the truth;
stop f\*cking with my mind
if i may be so rude.
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