The Struggle Within
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Heaven and the Size Changing Toy - Short Story
He moaned again sweetly, almost slumping to the floor as the feedback of energy between his horn, the rune, and the toy intensified.
Bad Puppy: Prologue
feedback / style / grammar tips, are encouraged and appreciated. [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection)
Grinding
All feedback helps me to be a better writer. votes, faves and watches are great, too! have a fun read!
Lifting a God's Curse.txt
I may or may not choose to continue this, but feedback is welcomed.
Exosuit Maintenance
The suit would then send feedback of the soldier's movements to a computer in the exoskeleton, which would move the suit accordingly.
Not A Sound From The Pavement
All feedback is most welcome. also remember that all votes, faves and watches will help others to find these stories to enjoy as well. cheerio! ** **
The Xenomorph Saga: Prologue
As i always say, your comments and feedback are greatly appreciated. unlike previously, however, your feedback will not determine whether or not i continue writing this story.
Wasteland Survivor - Prologue
#1 of wasteland survivor first story here, please give any and all feedback, don't hold back :) as for the source, the first thing i can say is lucid dreaming is a blast once you get the hang of it, i recount my story so far each night (kinda like a recap
Teenagers (Part 6)
And of course, feedback is greatly appreciated!
Last one left: prologue
Criticism and feedback will be appreciated so i can make improvements in the future and if you liked what you've read then don't hesitate to leave a watch and a fav! enjoy!!!!! i can still feel my sins howling over my shoulder.
In the Shadow of Moonlight - Ch. 1
Shout out to dog_girl_kari and aronpuma for reading and providing feedback! i'm always looking to improve my writing and will appreciate any feedback.