Aciec Aeternam (etarnal Battlefield) Chapter three
Chapter three, love to have feedback, let me know if you see any typo's :) carlo aka faukx \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_
Aciec Aeternam (etarnal Battlefield) Chapter two
Feedback is alway's welcome, please let me know if you find any typo's :p carlo aka faukx \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_
"Daggers of Darkness, Book 4: An Unexpected Discovery", Prologue
However, i will try to keep the typos, etc., to a minimum. the main things i would like from those reading this are comments, questions, and suggestions. i only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite.
The Prison ~ CYOA Java Game ~ V.1
**q** : i encountered an error/typo/bug! **a** : pm me the details or comment below so i can get that patched right up! **q** : the program opened but there are no buttons (or no text box)?
The Life of Jack
And sorry if you see lots of typos and gramer mistaks.
Where hope flies (sneak peek) (Bleach)
Please excuse any typos as well, as this is only a sneak peak. also there is light mention of religeon, though it is writen from an objective point, this isn't a bible story or a god bashing piece, so please do not flame about personal beliefs.
Quest For Fur Chapter: 3
If you see any typo's please let me know. the next day drew woke up ate breakfast, brushed his teeth and did everything else he usualy did in the morning. when he closed his medicine cabinet after getting some tylenol he let out a loud yelp! "ahhhhhh!
"Daggers of Darkness, Book 3, On the Trail of Legends" - Epilogue
However, i will try to keep the typos, etc., to a minimum. the main things i would like from those reading this are comments, questions, and suggestions. i only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite.
Digi Tails 3
, semi-nc - november 27, 1999 digi tails 3 - version 1.2 ( typo's ) by swamprat - with help from blakmane (cl) 1999 gay furry association more digital antics - based on an interesting drawing of a female gazumon by singshow note - some have
Eternal Phantasia - Chapter One - The first Appearance
Sorry about the typo party above, i'm still waking up. \*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\* ......? why is it so quiet?.. so dark?.. where am i, how did i get to this place? a forest? lake?
Perceptional - Pt 7: Closing a door
Even if it's just a typo. if something (somehow) tickled your literary sensibilities (ha fat chance), let me know so i can keep it going! **peter** morning came, the sun somehow finding its way through the window, beaming straight at peter's face.
A Step Down - Prologue
#1 of a step down this is the first part of story of eric lannistre (not a typo), and his life. it's the first story i've ever written, so be gentle when you criticise it. have fun reading!