Wasteland Survivor – The story of Crystal - ch1
As we rolled past the gates and were directed to a stop, i messed up the stop with the damn twitchy air-brakes and stalled my truck, crys of course sat idling, looking like she had done this all her life, show off.
Jim's Chronicles Route 35
“i… messed up. i should have listened to you and prepared better. i heard that she only used two pokemon but i didn't think they would be so formidable. i'll build up the roster and i won't let you down.
To Claim A Boy 5 by Rekhit & Griz Sylverwing
I'm sorry i messed up and there is one way i can promise you that i won't ever do it again." from behind his back he moved his paw and in it was a rectangular box.
Opal's Story - Chapter 5
I felt a lot better- i still felt like i messed up, but what shells told me seemed right.
Happiness Doll
"i messed up dinner." "we'll order pizza" "i passed out at the store." "it's alright; it happens we're fixing it."
Luke Chapter 2 (Revisited)
I feel my writing style has change a bit since i last wrote here so i'll be taking time to go back and fix things i messed up in previous stories.
Heat Of The Moment - Chapter 3
, these story's have a nice "fanbase" i guess now and so far all of you guys have amazed me with how nice you are so thanks :)_ _that being said all critic is appreciated and i really mean that i'm not goanna bite your head off for pointing out where i mess up
Act XXXIII
Act xxxiii: new moon over were-sin city "i messed up, didn't i?" sandy the ghost detective had finally broken the silence that hung over the three of us during our trip down the highway toward las vegas.
Make Them Pay.
Side note: i edited this, adding a little more, and correcting a few mistakes from earlier, tell me if i misspelled anything, or where i messed up grammatically, 'cause i did it at 12 freaking am, and though i don't _feel_ tired, i know i am.
XVII. These games we play
You mean... even though i messed up the game?" "did you, now? we had fun, didn't we?" nina and kaeden nodded, confirming my statement. "you see? it's okay, lily, really.
Trapped and trained: Chapter 14; River's outburst.
Also note: i just found out how badly i messed up the names of tyrome and jerome and how much i mixed them. chapter 14 "do you really think you can avoid the same fate that your parents suffered?
I Want You Back
"i thought, i could grab his blaster- i messed up, sorry." he stammered. lylla and blackjack came running over to rocket. "rocket!" lylla shouted, extremely distressed upon the sight of the exceedingly bloody raccoon. "damn.