CoB&G: Special Thanks Page
Luwyn werewusky: for sound advice, critique, spotting critical errors, collaborations and edit work. thanks to him, much of the series got the overhaul and improvements it desperately needed.
In Love With You.
If you're gonna criticize, remember: you're criticizing the "me" from years ago. i don't wanna change them cause, well, i made them at that age. don't blame me if you hate it. i thought you're the one who was trying to...
Anastasia St. Clair
**[handwriting illegible]** ...critic's protests, under hir guidance the show changed formats overnight.
Out Of Time - Book 1: The Witch - Chaper 1: The beginning
Occasionally she would look to her right wrist, where she wore a bracer over it that held a lit up touchscreen panel, to which showed both the current time and date as well as any mission critical information.
BX-132 Chapter 6
# # in the midland medical center's critical care unit's level 8 contamination isolation room two, rafe and sally lay side by side.
I'm a 12th Level Hyon With a +9 Eating Bonus
"stomach acid, critical hit," he said with a smile. he rolled the die again, getting another 20. his gut shook violently, and he rolled again. after his stomach acid got a few more critical attacks, all movement in his belly ceased.
Sneak Peek: Bittersweet Goodbyes.
I quickly worked my way up to a critical edge, and danced along the side to lure nightmare to it. once i got him to trigger his own critical edge, i darted around behind him, and pulled my own off. _wham!_ right off the ledge for the win! "y-yes!
new job, new experience
Said the fox startling maunri "hi i'm here for a job" maunri said "well heh we cant give you the job yet first we need to critic you" roxie said with a big grin on her face "but i wouldn't worry you look great i'm sure you'll get the job" maunri was
Penumbra Dreams
He hummed and clicked to himself as he critically picked through his wardrobe, emitting a soft 'ahh!' when his eye caught sight of the perfect casual outfit.
Alone: The introduction
"it's your husband, he's in critical condition!" the doctor explained. "why is he in critical condition, what happened," my mom said starting to tear up. "a drunk driver cut him off and he crashed into a ditch," the doctor said sadly.
Lost in the Silent Forest Ch. 4
**_calvin's survival check: critical success_** it took a while, but calvin managed to find something resembling a path.
Yes, Sir | by DolphinSanity
That little "crybaby" sting at the end of the sentence was his inner critic passing judgment on... everything. like it always did. himself, others, it didn't matter.