Important Issues of Writing
There was little build-up and the rape itself ultimately doesn't have the gravitas it deserves. it just, like domestic abuse or child abuse, comes off as a "shock moment".
Seeking Justice: Chapter 4
The wetness started to build up and the arousal coated the tongue as she cried out low and long.
A Green Thumb
It was quite intense, and appeared to be building up in several spots across his body rather than all over. "wha..."
New girl comes into town
Their tongues danced inside their mouths and the heat build up. both his hands were now under her dress, his thumbs pushing her stings down her legs.
Down In The Celler: Chapter 4
Kris yelled, ramming into jay's ass, the lion moaned in ecstasy, feeling his load building up. "oh, you must've sucked cock before, huh, foxey?" aron groaned as jay licked the pre-cum from his hard, throbbing cock.
Down in the Celler; Chapter 3
Aron yelled, plowing harder into the fox, his climax building up. "i want you!" jay begged, "fuck me harder! i want your cum inside of me!" the fox felt his own load building up and soon came across his chest, some of his cum landing on his face.
Starfox Misadventures: Chapter 1
Fox gripped the wolfs ears and plunged deeper into his mouth faster, deeper, feeling his load build up.
Otter's Daily Life- Hot Day
The creeping build up and tingle from the tip of her tail and down her spine as she moaned louder and louder until she lost control and coated her brother's face with her girlcum. jean fell back and relaxed with her legs spread.
Fairy in the Moonlight
He rubs at his head, a pressure building up in his skull. out of nowhere, a spiraling protrusion of bone breaks free through his skin, causing him to fall over onto his knees in pain.
The Last Human Part 17
Raito felt everything tingling all over his body from the inside and outside, even bentina felt the same thing building up inside her too.
Hiking Woes
By now, evan was bracing himself for the build up to come, his legs wobbling slightly at having the dragons great mass penetrating him.
A Day of Fun
He felt the pressure of his cum build up under the lion's feet, with bits leaking through but the main torrent kept at bay by the lion.