Darkness
Please leave feedback to let me know what you think. darkness surrounds apathy abounds life holds no bright light nothing to shine in this endless night.
Wicked Intent [Female Werewolf; Muscle growth; Hetero]
I really hope you like this, and if you do, please leave a comment or some feedback!
The First Session
Post your thoughts/feelings/criticisms, any feedback is welcome feedback! the first thing that daniel was consciously aware of was that he was completely naked.
Out the Airlock: Chapter 1
Please, i really would like some feedback on the story. i hope that it has a good interest hook and attention grabber that draws the reader into the story.
Am I Easy or What?
All feedback is always appreciated, and will help others to find these stories to enjoy as well. cheerio!
Prologue to "Feral"
So far the best bit is the prologue, so i punched it into the computer so i could share it for feedback. it's still far from a finished product, but i wanted to get an idea of how well i was doing.
Susan's Story 4-Something takes root
Their bodies spasming and jolting once again through the feedback loop of their nervous systems.
The Patrol part 3
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1st December
After some feedback of my original story, i decided to do a nice edition for those who felt offended or bad about the evil edition. this is an optional fork (starting at chapter 9) to go a different (consentual) line.
Delayed destiny ch 8 (Clean)
Any and all feedback is welcome. may contain content intended for mature audiences! it was a weird feeling returning to school after everything that happened, but i was glad things were going back to normal.
And another update. Whoopie!
And i'm disappointed with the lack of feedback in my last journal entry, so i'm compelled to write shorter journals. or at least try.
Gold Lightning Series 2…Part One
Plz comment and vote for feedback to make my stories better. gold is out look for food with his boyfriend black lightning. they want to harvest some seeds to make a garden for gold. they have apple trees and banana trees.