Eternal Mortality: Ian Fastolf
Perhaps what ian is most infamous for, is the revision of the gray watch. as most know the gray watch started out as an honor guard for various fursons of importance. however, ian seen potential for much more.
Dragons Lair pt 27
I spent the last hour revising this, taking out bits i didnt like and even deleting a blowjob because i thought it didnt work with what i wanted to do.
Black Swan pt 2
I'll probably make these longer on a revise but this is the first few things i've written in years so yeah... would love some constructive crit. i woke up with a start, feeling another presence against me.
Nation - The Greater Haromian Empire
If it weren't obvious by some of the numbers being tossed around, things are... quite huge with the new revisions.
Remote Control Testing
As the two cuddled together, mazzy climbed atop them and leaned in to whisper again into their ear, already sharing their ideas for new revisions and tests.
Zim's Backstory
"fuck it," zim sighed as he turned back to the small book in his hands, "i don't really want to revise anyway." i rushed into the kitchen to see a pool of colorless liquid pooling around thia's feet.
An Ounce of Hope
It's been revised heavily, but i think it's getting there now. getting saerus to finally talk about himself will take a little while, he's not one to warm up easily.
RE: Wolf Moon Chapter 1
#3 of wolf moon \*note\* i am remaking this series due to it not showing up and it needs revising.
Angel's best meal revised
Any characters in this story they are all owned by disney however this story is entirely my idea well now that that's cleared up on with the story i went back, and fixed my errors and again thanks for the comments angel's best meal i have completely revised
Artist's Model
His hands move down the sculpture to revise something between its legs. esa's cheeks burn with embarassment, but she tries to focus and give him what he wants. nyvi is out of her sight again, but she can easily summon up her image in her mind.
Goldenmane Chapter I - Paperwork
He could think of a few exercises he might like to engage in with ropes and blindfolds involving the sixth floor but they might not be up to organisational policies and standards as updated in general code 117.43 (revised) 2014. in triplifuckingcate.
Those Bygone Dog-Star Days - Chapter 28 of 37
That's also being revised, mr. hughes said." i sat there, eating my dinner and trying to act disinterested - insurance policies, et-cetra, boring stuff. i choked down some water and played with my food.