Snow pt 1
It's been years since i put anything to paper(so to speak) and i'm just testing the waters, if you like or if you have any useful pointers( i.e. you suck is not useful).if it's not hated to much i'll revise this later and add the rest of stories.thanks and
Writing Commissions Available (8/3/2022)
. \* i do previews, however, so if you'd like multiple sneak peeks of you work for revision and for your input, i'll gladly send you some previews for you to enjoy and give your input into.
An Adventure of a Life Time Chapter 1: Reality
Hello sofurry this is shade, this will be a revised version of my first chapter of this story. the title is no longer “needed trust" and is now “an adventure of a lifetime".
Only Human (revised), Chapter 3
So, here is chapter 3 of the revision of only human. enjoy. * * * the halls of the station seemed about how nathan expected, just wide enough for two to walk abreast with pristine white walls and an occasional terminal.
Revisions...
(short story poem) revisions...
Luke Chapter 2 (Revisited)
#1 of luke (revisited) a revised version of an old story, bringing an old work into a new writing style.
Guardians: Downfall Chapter 1
Alright, so, went back, revised a few things, paragraphs need to be moved apart a little more, but spelling has been checked. redid and merged in chapter 1 and 2 to make chapter 1. hope you guys like it!
Canines' Autumn Ch. 1: Showdown
A revision from an very early work on fa which was also revised :p . meeting each other for the first time, kouya and ten have a showdown stemming from one miscommunication.
The Beastmaker's War - AIR
As i am sure most of you have heard, i bring a revised treaty before you this time.
Collared - Chapter 22 - Revision
The day would begin and end quietly, as a leaf caught in a maelstrom might be picked up and whisked off somewhere far away, with no idea of how to return to where from it came. The middle would be loud, and at the end of the day, would leave those...
Panavision
It took five full revisions, but i succeeded! then did another five revisions integrating the changes i had made over the course of the reduction, putting back in sentences i missed, cutting out ones that were unnecessary.
Demons
#4 of don't leave me - seasons one & two samson finds himself confronting some of his deepest fears.authors note dlm is currently undergoing revisions so please excuse the mess.