The Explorer's Lament *TEST/Critique requested*
Long, twisting hallways, cursed stone walls, damned souls, rancid slime of things that died eons ago; the tunnels of Orak were nothing short of hellish and corrupting. The sanest minds, strongest bodies and quickest wits turns to dust when faced with...
A sample scene
'Closer...almost there...just a few more steps to go.' Feint refractions signal their way up a tall lace of smoke lulling in the sunlit gloom. Through a crack in the canopy, a single hungry tongue holds its breath, licking in anticipation. Though no...
With Royalty.
_Project Renegade. _ Classified level _Blue_, the code meant for the Doctor's eyes only. Not even Snively knew of its existence. It was designed to be the ultimate war machine in the Empire. From Prow to Stern the...
7:32
Fritz tore down the constricting corridors of Starcruiser-1148, dodging men, machines, and anything else that found itself in his way. The hallways' dim fluorescents tossed just enough light to distinguish objects from shadow, and the small creature...
Meet Howard
\*rated adult for language and nudity. I am looking for some feedback on the work. writting style, characters, etc. Let me know what you think about the story. It's still a work in progress, but I thought I would show off what...
Captain Incesto and the SPAAACE BABIES
There is no Captain Incesto because I ate him. He did not give me considerable rectal distress because I possess no such rectum because I'm a skeletal dinosaur. There are no Space Babies. I can't believe you ever thought there were. I mean what the...
Bio-Morph-One(tentative title) as of 3-20-2015
First story in the 'bio-morph' universe. Protagonist comes home to a small retrofitted hotel room that he shares with his single retired mother from an unsuccessful job hunt. The building has been changed from a large hotel complex into 'free'...
Healing
Ayle yanked the kobold spear from Rith's punctured armor, tearing a fair amount of flesh back with it. The wolf let out a wordless moan of agony as the gryphon worked by the light of his staff. "Hold still, Rith. I can't - Oh never mind." Ayle set a...
Firedancer 3: the Lesson
Pyrrhi awoke with a start as sunlight quickly flooded the room. His paw shifted up to rest over his chest, the familiar thud of his heart seeming to travel up to his sensitive ears. "It's Midday." Rana's voice called from near the previously draped...
Indian Summer
I know a lot of people consider themselves to be natives of this country, and I for one will never argue against it. It doesn't matter in the long run. Knowing where you came from is great, but knowing where you're going is a far...
Sins + Virtues Part 1: His Slothful Daughter
The time on Rich's alarm clock showed 9:00 when he woke up, this was the second time that week that he was late. Ever since his wife, Molly, was promoted at her job she had to work late hours meant that there was very little time for any fun that they...
New Revelations
_note: no critiques, this is just for shits and giggles, nothing professional that's ever going to be published_ _prologue: [http://www.sofurry.com/view/496375](http://www.sofurry.com/view/496375)_ _chapter 2: [http://www.sofurry.com/view