Gryphon Cooks Potatoes, Part 1 (Otherwise Untitled)
It offered no commentary, waiting for her to falter and decide of her own accord to the merits it offered. it would be there, if she chose to reach for it. she looked back to the image of a cactus, as if hoping for something of encouragement.
Legend of the Gladiator: Prologue
If you have any commentary or critic, please go ahead and put it in the comments. anything said can only help. for now though, enjoy this short prologue to a long story.
Wild Speed and Technical Difficulties
Shi could not see it hirself since shi did not want to look down, but jason's commentary helped hir get an idea.
Fox and Wolf: The Village Fair: Market Day
With commentary from the storytellers included for a more personal experience!
Legal Limits 3: Happy Birthday Conan...
It's a little late and I'm very sorry about that puppy... But Happy Birthday Conan. The funny things is, I'm not really a 100% sure how old you really are... Not that it matters at this point. I wish I had been able to send you your birthday present...
The Walk from Darkness to Light: Part 1
The Walk from Darkness to Light: A Brief History of the Canius People Compiled by, Rhys ap Tewdwr, Lead Archivist of The Sapphire Empire. The history of my people has been subjected to many interpretations, assumptions, and wild flights of fancy....
The Complex
The Complex By James Raisanen On the face of it, the building looks great; new paint job, new carpentry work, hell, even new gutters. But once you get inside, the smell invades your sinuses like the storming of Normandy Beach. And that's just the...
Regarding Carrion Diets
This slice-of-slice tale provides a little commentary of how a society of anthropomorphic critters might view the eating habits of scavengers. particularly crows. enjoy!
One hundred and One, falling out of the sky
#1 of 101st aiborne this my first story and i don't expect it to be that good so commentary will be greatly appreciated. i stare at my reflection, lightly shown in the window due to the dimness inside our carrier.
The UmbreGlace Experience: Chapter 3
Jast and tyler came in and watched, with some commentary from tyler. me and jast had the same idea and ice beamed the servine's mouth shut. he looked at us with a look that practically screamed, "what did i do?!"
The Brightest Spots of the Moon
It's a scene from my upcoming story 'the brightest spots of the moon" which will ultimately be a commentary about mental illness and relationships.
Lost Innocence Chapter 3.
Stephan left the room, and continued with his race commentary. "stephan is now on the home stretch, but the other horses are close behind, will he cross the line before the others?"