Be Careful What You Wish For: Chapter I
#1 of be careful what you wish for series it is my first story, so provide some criticism! but don't be a jerk. this story is about a wolf that is into babying and diapers...not giving away too much' so you will be surprised!
Lost in Translation - Chapter 3: The Critical Choice
Without a glance back, the lop-ear marched forwards to the other side of the river. The wings that flew James' heart a moment ago evaporated as he came to realize what was spoken, no number of rocks were capable of sinking his stomach further than it...
A Silent Soul- Chapter 1
Feel free to leave a comment with constructive criticism, or just say if you liked it! or not! totally up to you! other than that, i think it's time to go! bye! ^\_^
What Universe am I In??? Chapter: 0 (intro)
Constrictive criticism appreciated!
Alcoholic Influences
He was well aware of haiden's critical gaze as he poured a single shot into a plastic red party cup, and filled in to the brim with coke.
Birdsong
“[_battery critical! ambient light detected. deploy solar arrays?]_” asked the suit, throwing up another box of text in front of her face. ariane waved away the suggestion.
Tiger Stories And Tiger Songs.
I expect you to be highly critical, because an author is only as good as his best critic. for those of you that read it, i was inspired to write this by the neil gaiman book "anansi boys" and thus, indirectly, african oral tradition.
Part One: Power Colors and Meanings
And like the blues, they are very sensitive to criticism. and we've already reached the last two. i'll keep the last two simple.
Horse meat
critics and comments, yes please.
Dr. Silver
critical injuries like the little girls before me are worked on first while the non critical are given pain killer and put in any large area we can put them in. the doctors rushing by give me half reports.
Macro Wolf
Any constructive criticism is welcome.
Brother's Broken Spell
._ once you've become my right-hand bitch, i won't have to take criticism from them, or anyone else..."