Guard dog!
Please ffeel free to leave feedback, critisism is always wellcome too the morning after passed like any other... boring classes, hard classes, then lame classes, followed by harder classes.
The House Dahan
So this beeing my first story of any kind ever, i'm expecting many of the more experienced writers (i.e. anyone with at least two stories) might be able to provide some constructive critisism, please do so.
A new school chapter 2: Adam's family
I dunno.. some people say i write good... others say .... different things :p but still.. any constructive critisism is appreciated ^.^ and leave comments if you want the story to continue! ~your friendly neighborhood freaky fox jake
Arcturus Prelude : Flaming Skies
#2 of arcturus **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!
My Awesome 4/20
Thanks for deciding to choose my story for your viewing pleasure ^^ i welcome constructive critisism and comments on what you think of the story.
Of Wolf and Man: Chapter one
As allways comments, questions, and critisism are all welcome
Make a Wish: Chapter 1
It's the first story i've published in about 5 years, so please be constructive with your critisism. thank you for taking the time to read it. enjoy. adrian sat nonchalantly sipping at his drink while he awaited the arrival of his guests.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 11 – Betrayal Explained
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 5 – Secrets Revealed
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 1 – A Bond Strengthened
Any and all constructive critisism, comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated. i hope you all enjoy reading what i have put together.
Chris Klebb Versus Anthro Island: The Sexumentary
Constructive critisism is the best._**
The House Dahan part III: Home Alone
#4 of dahan **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!