Test Fight Scene - Criticism Needed

He exhaled sharply, gripping his daggers in both paws tighter than ever. This enemy was unlike anyone he had faced before. His movements were erratic, yet precise. His attacks were random, but concise. The fact that he had even managed to block that...

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The Queen's Trial

**The Queen's Trial** ** ** _Written by Arian Mabe (Amethyst Mare)_ _Commissioned by Vaeros_ _ _ _ _ The dragoness stood tall and proud on the castle's spire, the large, flat area ringed with a ridged wall, which was reminiscent...

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Battle Glory

Come the night, they will be put to the test. fight, kill, die. that is what they will do until only a single champion remains, the best of this cohort, the most primal of males.

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Fara Play

Gonna have to take you for a test fight later." she said, dropping the paintbrush and bucket back on the tool chest which sank into the floor with the press of a button. "but first we clean up and celebrate."

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Chapter 3: The Adventurer and the Alpha

"ahhh, that is good, but before you go, do you what to have a fight with me, and not the weak fights, or testing fight, a true fight with me?" "ya! that sounds like a good idea! yen can you be the one who says who is the winner in this fight, for us?"

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The Knight Academy - Chapter I

This is the hardest education, since you need a lot more theoretical experience, and test fights to lead. at the third year, a strategist will be assigned to a team, and learn to communicate with them.

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To Be The Best - Chapter 4: A Larger World

You take a test, fight and do a job with a teacher. do good enough and you'll get your real badges. work hard and knock it out first try. that'll help you hit the ground running. can't wait to hear you passed." "so the test is in two months?

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Side Quest 3 - A Little Role Playing

A big, heavy paw came crashing down on the lady and she was put on the ground, ending the latest in the long line of testing fights. she lay there, panting and groaning for a moment before she rolled onto her back and lifted an arm. "i... i think...

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Aaru - Chapter 29 (The Trial of the Hunted)

It is a test. fighting only forms part of the challenge. let me explain about the arena. there is a boundary around the temple, which extends far into the forest surrounding it. you may go anywhere within that boundary during the challenge.

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