10 - Holiday Denouement
It would be much easier, he said, to haul raw ingredients than the final product. toby and i saw no problems with that. charles and tiffany left first, since both still had some homework to finalize.
Mummerflies - A Karmic Clutch
I'm very pleased with this final product. ferals, an amorous insect and the wonderful salrith all in one package, yet another victim to one of my fiendish creations.
The Good Deal
So, he told me what he wanted as plot and characters, and here's the final product.
Stomach Prison
I intended for the final product to be about half this length. oh well. hope someone enjoyed this.
Lost in Twilight - Chapter 3
Still a lot more that i need to learn, but regardless, i'm very happy with this final product! "i don't understand," i whispered lowly, as i stared into the darkness. mara was being surprisingly silent.
Life's a Bitch
The final product would surely come with an e-document quite capable of answering that question, but the prototype was written on glossy white, deaf, uncaring paper. jason put his head in his hands and collapsed onto the couch.
The Railroad - Terminus - 6.6
All the products from plant factories are specially designed, with unique markers added to the final product. just run a photon mass spectrometer, and you can tell exactly where it was grown."
Duke & Alex part 4
The final product was stunning. the fishnet stocking, the dress, and his hair. the clock read 4:30, meaning time to go. it would take a while to get to the club, so he had to leave early.
Mega Trainer Chapter 6
Pokespeak [] will now be normal speech for reasons p.s.2 i think i'm going to start doing the story in third person, i like the final product a lot more that way chp 6 the sun just began to peek back over the horizon.
A King's Legacy Ch.26
I am ok with what the final product was here. oust can finally grow to be more than what he was, and i've never become so attached to a single character in my entire time writing. i fell in love with this tiger just as hopelessly as aster had.
Hero Chapter 3
I applogize if there are any tense problems remaining in this final product. i tried to fix that, but the entire original was in present tense...so i might have missed something here or there while converting it to past tense.
Dimensional Balance Chapter 14: A Rock and a Hard Place
The battle scene in this chapter was kicking my arse hard-core, so please tell me what you think of the final product, that i finally decided was post-worthy. once again, this chapter ended up running long.