The Warning
I could improve or polish it up, but i realized that would defeat the point. this is supposed to be a message written in haste.
Sushi and Pizza
How nothing could improve upon the perfection of the night. nor could there be anything which added could improve on the perfection of sushi herself. and sushi squirmed with the delight.
Burdens - Chapter 15: Recreation
He spoke of different techniques to improve the strength of his throws and how to improve upon his spiral, though he mentioned that it seemed to be pretty fair as far as it currently was.
Breaking Point Part 1 -- Cleaner & Even Dirtier
I dont know how good it will be or if any of this writing has improved, but i do hope you enjoy it. this story has been analyzed and edited a lot, so hopefully there is a seen improvement. enjoy the story!
Experimenting with her friend.
Ps: please give me some tips and point out any misspells or typos for me to fix, anything that helps my writing improve is better than not improving at all:3 audra groaned annoyingly upon hearing the words coming from her mother's mouth. her going on about
Pronounced Dead
Nothing about how this base is run will be altered and will continue to improve. a memorial service for mister parkins will be held three days from now at the garden during the afternoon. i ask that you attend if you can."
The Golden Stag, Pt 3: Death of the Author 2
He was the hero i struggled with the most in improvement. and like that, there was a game won. it felt... good. i hated to admit it. i couldn't remember something happening and i felt good about it.
Ribbon - Chapter 9
Said i took that initial step to open up to him, that afterwards i took the needed steps to listen, to think, to improve myself.
The Wolf Soul - Part Two
Can you do anything to improve the symptoms with the medication? they have worked well in the past, andy's been able to function much better with them." "...until...n-now..." andy smacked his lips.
Second sighting
If there are ways you think i could improve the writing in it or college life please drop me a comment, i'd really appreciate it.** second sighting this was the place.
The Lead Crown: Ch 4b, Your Highness (Pt 1)
Tobias had taken to fever and his breathing was far from normal, but within an hour, after the benefit of an herbal chest rub, the prong horn was decidedly improved-- not well... but improved.
The Ruso Antrum Descent Chapter 1: No Choice But To Go
Believe it or not, but the people who built this place made it so that you improve your abilities as you decend." gebun listened to the lizardman and processed the information. "go down floor by floor. improve abilities. gather powerful gear."