"write a detailed action scene with at least two characters, starting the action near the beginning, and finishing towards the end" was this week's theme (wow, that's a mouthful to say).
Action, Age Difference, Assassin, Blowjob, Car, City, Cum, Fight, M/M, Ocelot, Prostitution, Revenge, Violence (Not In Yiff), Wolf, WritingGroupChallenge
I've completely lost the ability to write good action scenes. it sucks. i just can't do it any more. i'll try to correct that in this chapter, but please, tell me what you really think about the fight scenes.
Dragoness, Human, M/F, Plot Development, Relationships
Sure, the action scenes were beyond silly, but i could appreciate how 'awesome' it was.
though i rarely use that term.
Action, Age Difference, Gay Relationships, M/M, Movie night, Mystery, Ocelot, Prostitution, Shirtless, Sin city, Timber Wolf, WritingGroupChallenge, pajamas, pizza
Sure, the action scenes were beyond silly, sometimes bordering on nonsensical and pulled straight from a comic strip's childish pages, but i could appreciate how 'awesome' they were.
Adult, Age Difference, Anthro, City, Drama, Gay, Gay Relationships, Hitman, M/M, Mild Romance, Mystery, Neo noir, Ocelot, Story Series, Thriller, Wolf, apartment, prostitute, wholesome
Lance felt the phone in his pocket go off right as the best action scene in the movie was starting. the slightly chubby aardwolf grumbled as he reached into his pocket, disturbing his boyfriend who had been pushing his head into lance's paunch.
Aardwolf, BDSM, Hypnosis, Latex, M/M, Master/Slave
For a while he succeeded, keeping his vision pinned on the action scenes.
Anal, Anthro, Aroused, Ass, Bad Language, Ball Fondling, Balls, Biting, Blush, Bulge, Cock, College, Compassion, Consensual, Cuddle, Cuddling, Cum, Cumming, Cumshot, Deep Penetration, Deep Thrust, Dick, Docking, Domination/Submission, Draft Horse, Drunken Fun, Equine, Erection, Fingering, First Time, Fondling, Foreplay, Frottage, Fucking, Gay, Hard-On, Homosexual, Horse, Licking, Light D/S, M/M, Mild Spanking, Musk, Naked, Nude, Nudity, Oral, Orgasm, Penetration, Penis, Pheromones, Precum, Sex, Sheath, Shirtless, Size Difference, Submissive, Sweat, Tailhole, Teasing, Teen, Teenager, Teenagers, Tongue
This was, i believe, the very first time i actually committed myself to writing an action scene. i'd always assumed they were fiendishly difficult.
i should credit, here, mike luce's comic "fite!" which i still regard as an irreplaceable masterpiece.
Epic, Iambic pentameter, Poetry, blank verse
So after a lot of boring and totally believable dialog and some rather awkward moments we finally get to the action scenes where we see are first victims and people getting hurt, all of which!! happen in cliche and expected ways.
Dragon457, Horror, Horror movie, Moive, Movie review