Dangerous Chase

"write a detailed action scene with at least two characters, starting the action near the beginning, and finishing towards the end" was this week's theme (wow, that's a mouthful to say).

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a tale of dragons part 15

I've completely lost the ability to write good action scenes. it sucks. i just can't do it any more. i'll try to correct that in this chapter, but please, tell me what you really think about the fight scenes.

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Writing Tips

**action sequence tips** action scenes are one of the harder things to write. the trick is to strike a balance in how much description you have.

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Meaningful Moments

Sure, the action scenes were beyond silly, but i could appreciate how 'awesome' it was. though i rarely use that term.

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Cherry: Chapter 8 - Meaningful Moments

Sure, the action scenes were beyond silly, sometimes bordering on nonsensical and pulled straight from a comic strip's childish pages, but i could appreciate how 'awesome' they were.

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Relic: A tale of Ancient Evils (What to expect of the upcoming story)

Upon noticing any form of deception amongst the actors/actresses, i will start to focus on the brawl for the following reasons: the action scenes it would cause from the disagreements= interesting and heart pounding moments.

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Toy for the Night

Lance felt the phone in his pocket go off right as the best action scene in the movie was starting. the slightly chubby aardwolf grumbled as he reached into his pocket, disturbing his boyfriend who had been pushing his head into lance's paunch.

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Upset Acquaintances

This week's writing prompt was "write an action scene that takes up the majority of your prompt" with the goal of keeping it around 1000 words.

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Ragnarok - V

This was, i believe, the very first time i actually committed myself to writing an action scene. i'd always assumed they were fiendishly difficult. i should credit, here, mike luce's comic "fite!" which i still regard as an irreplaceable masterpiece.

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Amusement (Horror)

So after a lot of boring and totally believable dialog and some rather awkward moments we finally get to the action scenes where we see are first victims and people getting hurt, all of which!! happen in cliche and expected ways.

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Changing Fates, Chapter Three

(writing good action scenes is hard.) then we will have some interesting human interaction, if chi can survive the decent through the atmosphere!

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